Can someone please translate this to Japanese?

bangbroz · (#1 (**permalink**))

I wrote a poem for my Japanese girlfriend the today, I wish to surprise her when she wakes up.
Although she speaks English, I want to try and show my affection in Japanese

Please, help me translate this:

"I really can't stop thinking about
you, and I dont know why.
Maybe because your're my angel,
that god sent from way up high.

Your soft lips,
Sparkling eyes,
Silky hair,
You mesmerize me

I am sitting here looking at your photos
Gazing your beauty, I am hypnotized
But god truly sent an angel,
Because you are not only beautiful on the outside
Your heart, although been hurt so bad,
it's golden and crystal clear.

Your emotions embraces me,
Your kind words and care,
You're one in a million,
A true beauty that is hard to find

You always make me happy
And sheer me up when I'm sad
I don't think I could ever be without you
You walked into my life, now please stay

When you are happy,
I feel butterflies in my belly,
Because all I ever want, is your smile
Your happiness is everything I ask for

You are an angel, my angel
Everything I want and need
Just a sincere, laid back,
honest and caring girl

I thank god for sharing you with me
I hope you will forever stay
My life was ripped to pieces,
but you're sewing it back, piece by piece

And I want you to know,
That no matter what you wear,
No matter if you use make up or not
I would always hold your hand proudly
no matter where we are, or who we meet
Because you are beautiful,
just the way that you are.

let these words that I am about to say
enter your ears,and travel down your veins,
and stay inside your heart.
Because even if I only had one last breath left,
I would use it to whisper to you,
I love you."

It is a little long, sorry !
Arigatou

KyleGoetz · (#2 (**permalink**))

Try it first on your own; that is how things tend to work around here unless it's a very short request.

bangbroz · (#3 (**permalink**))

Hello, thank you for replying.
I have tried very so much on my own, for hours now.
That is why I found this Japanese forum and humble as I am, used it as my last resort.

My apology, I just couldn't translate all.

KyleGoetz · (#4 (**permalink**))

Post your attempt.

JohnBraden · (#5 (**permalink**))

I would tend to believe that she'd much more appreciate your attempt at translating it with all the errors it may have than to realize your poem was read by someone before her and translated into a level of Japanese she's sure to know it didn't come from you. But maybe that's the female in me thinking that....

Nyororin · (#6 (**permalink**))

I am going to second what JohnBraden said. Were I to receive a poem translated into English from my non-English-speaking husband, I would be *much* more impressed and happy to receive one that had been translated by hand... No matter how short or poorly translated it was.