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my own Naruto-style character -
12-06-2007, 07:40 PM
Ok, so I came up with this character when I joined a Naruto Guild at Gaia.
It's not all that great, and he does look like a girl...but hey, I tried my best.  Anyway, most of my drawings have some sort of story behind them, even the abstract ones. So.... Name: Shin Ryoma of the Sound Village Brief Bio: He was orphaned after Akatsuki members murdered his parents. He studies jutsu from other villages and creates his own. A prodigy....but not that strong physically. He's kind of a loner, too...   I don't think I should write down all the jutsu he knows...should I? 
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12-06-2007, 08:04 PM
Loving it! So detailed... is that needles in his hand? *sniff* Haku...
 I still haven't gotten over his death... Pd- As for the drawings on the right... lol everything is relative and contradictory ~
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12-06-2007, 08:10 PM
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Yeah, they are needles. I mentioned that Shin likes to study other cultures's jutsu. The difference here is that the needles create vibrations and attack the inner organs of the victim...rather than just paralizing them and making them look dead (like Haku did....poor Haku.... )Thank you for your comment ^_^
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12-07-2007, 04:03 AM
nice drawing, i like the concept but your right he does look really girly. maybe you shouldn't have drawn him with his hand on his hip.^^ but otherwise its pretty kewl.
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12-08-2007, 07:35 PM
I like it though your right it does look like a girl but it is good...
FINAL FANTASY CLAN: CODE NAME: AURON
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12-08-2007, 07:40 PM
hm... <.< I think it doesn't looks good .... to many mistaks with the proportion .
 ギャー(*0*((◎—————ー(°°； ) スッポヌケ〜 ✿ あなた だけ が みれば いい...  狂気と真実は紙一重 ✿そして坊やは眠りについて 息衝く灰の中の炎ひとつ、ふたつと 浮かぶふくらみ愛しい横顔 大地に垂るる幾千の夢、夢 銀の瞳のゆら(◕‿‿◕ ) It's a thin line between genius and stupidity. Once you cross it there is no going back!! Luckily I have tippex and a pen so I can just redraw it where I like!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA =_= †♫†
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12-09-2007, 07:49 AM
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 Name: Shin Ryoma Gender: Male Age: 19 Appearance: 5' 9'', with white hair and light skin. His eyes are a light blue. His expression never changes, not even during battle. It appears as if he were emotionless to everything. Bio: Shin's parents, both faithful follower's of Orochimaru teachings, died during battle againts the Akatsuki. Orphaned at ten, and being the last of his clan, Shin trained in secret so he could one day destroy the Akatsuki and anything (or anyone) related to them. As a child, Shin would leave the villae in secret and studied many forms of jutsu from other villages, including those from the Village Hidden in the Leaves and in the Mist. Now, as an adult, his goal is to find the Akatsuki and kill them. Rank: Jounin Clan: Ryoma Weapons/Equipment: Tama Yokobue (musical instrument) Hagane Needles (steel needles) Shuriken Suzu (bell earring) Bloodline: unknown Jutsu: -Ninjutsu- Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone) Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu) Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker) momentarily boost the user's reflexes -Genjutsu- Oto no Shi no Jutsu(Sound of Death) channels chakra through needles to create sound vibrations withing the body, thus attacking the internal organs and such while creating disturbing images. Kaichou no Shi (Death's Melody) requires his Tama Yokogue and chakra. A marvelous song. Attacks the nervous system, causing the victim to sucumb to violent seizures. Uta no Kamakiri no Jutsu (Song of the Mantis Jutsu) another song from his Tama Yokogue. A beautiful song with a hidden mantis screech to low for anyone to detect. This attacts the victim's nervous system and muslces and leaves them completely paralized. Akumu no Jutsu (Nightmare Jutsu) The bell on his left ear isn't just for decoration. It brings the victims deepests fears to life while draining their chakra in the process. This also allows the user to attack while the victim is in fear. -Taijutsu- Otoga Senpū (Sound Whirlwind) Similar to the Konoha Senpu (Leaf Whirlwind), but with a twist. A hidden sound is created from the force of the kick. This maily attacks the stomach or the brain. Slowly, but surely, the victim will feel "sick" (nausea). -Custom Jutsu- Seishin Daraku no Jutsu (Mind Corruption Jutsu) With his bell, Shin can create more illusions, but these will allow him to control the victim and have him/her do his bidding. Like a slave. After lifting his control, the victim will remember nothing of what happened. -Kekkei Genkai- Finaru Uta (Final Song) A dangerous jutsu in which Shin irritates his own vocal cords to imitate a mantis. Powerful, and deadly. Can kill anyone in the surrounding area...but this might cause Shin to either lose his voice forever....or die from the strain. Summoning Contract: Kamakiri Shou no Jutsu (Praying Mantis Summoning)
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07-04-2008, 03:04 AM
A lot better than my characters. Although I put a lot of thought into them the drawings don't come out to good. And I can never have them create jutsu. It is so hard. But I did have the little sister of my first character creae a jutsu using flowers. Even so it wasn't too good. I am not going to get into the deep and long to type history and future of my characters but I will give a brief description.
Name: Hikari Mint Age: 20 Hair: SHort, Brown Eyes: Brown Siblings: Hana Teacher: Doesn't have one Team Members: None Other: She ran off (I'm still creating a reason) Name: Hana Mint Age: 13 Hair: SHort, brown Eyes: Brown Siblings: Hikari Teacher: Formerly Sunako Team Members: Usagi and Hiraagi Other: She uses jutsu invovling flowers Name: Rei Mint Age: SOmewhere in her 20s Hair: Long Brown Eyes: Brown SIblings: Ririka Teacher: None Team Members: None Other: Left when Ririka was murdered. Joined AKatsuki. Hikari's cousin. Name: Sunako MArasuki Age: 25 Hair: Long Black Eyes: Purple Siblings: None Teacher: None Team Members: None Other: She murdered Ririka. She was Hana's teacher but then died to a disease. Name: Ririka Mint Age: ??? Hair: Semi-short Brown Eyes: Brown Siblings: Rei Teacher: None Team Members: NOne Other: She was thought to be dead but was alive and hiding. She later returned. So yeahs.... Ten times more amazing than you!
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07-04-2008, 03:37 AM
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great job also...now to keep it hidden form laura.....
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