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12-07-2007, 06:51 PM
Same here but I do have some good ones some were I just need to find them.
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12-07-2007, 07:15 PM
Lets see I started drawing when I was 5 or 6, so ive been drawing off and on for.....I dare not say. Actually I ended up going on to study photograhy, so thats my gig.
I like Kanji's idea for the tree, but as he said it must be done right. You dont want it too busy to distract from the main subject, but you want just enough to in a sense give it some framing. I am more of the straight fowrad "in your face" type when it comes to photographs. I am still likeing your first one though. Since im a photog I will use one as an example. This was actually taken by one of my daughters friends, who I have been helping out. She has used the trees/bushes on the side to help fill in the negative space, yet it doesnt distract from the main subject. It creates a nice framing that keeps the eye from wandering off. The lens flare on the upper right would alot of times be a no-no, but in this case it works well to give the upper corner a bit of framing. Experiment with different things to find what you like best. The nice thing about art is that its subjective. No two people look at it the same way. Good look and hope to see some more of your work.
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12-08-2007, 04:54 AM
how bout snow, trees, and maybe something like a small bird or animal in or around the tree?
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12-08-2007, 03:14 PM
Hmm....It may be just me, but the placement of the leg sticking out looks awkward. The advice NickVelvet gave was great! You definitely need to put in snow falling, you can create a solemn sky with grays and dark blues...
If you do put a tree, make it sort of far away so the main focus is your character there. (Who I really like) ^_- Keep at it! You got this!
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12-08-2007, 03:37 PM
Pic #1 : Is she holding something? Her hand seems to be holding something in the air......That pic seemed to me to be a peaceful quiet winter's day.
Pic #2 : Sweet pic.....Is the hat really supposed to be over the ears? For some reason after I saw the full body pic seems to scream out I want I knitted beany hat ^_^ Since I noticed that the scarf in the back of the chic is flying about might I suggest light wind. If you put in a tree make sure it's in movement with your scarf ^_^........scarf is too high up to be a stride walk. Maybe swaying her hair to make it look in conjuction with the scarf.....Otherwise wow. 20 thumbs up for your pics ^_^  Property of Eiri & Pexster Virtual Boyfriend...Hyakushi in *Indian suit*  Eiri - 41 : Rojjin -43 : Sly - 121 : Yuna7780 - 57 : reihino - 14 : Crani - 22 : Ramones1976 - 0 : AnimeBaby112 - 3 : Arikado - 1 : KikiBunny23 - 3 : Pexter -0
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12-08-2007, 04:17 PM
i like the top one. but maybe use a little more detail in the background. i like how you drew the stairs the chick is sitting on. you should put the same effort in the area behind her. I like the second one. that one looks good.
 "Im too drunk to taste this chicken" - colonel sanders
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