Please help me! - Page 5

NatsuNatsu · (#41 (**permalink**))

O_O That's even better! Thank you Moodaddy! <3333

NickVelvet · (#42 (**permalink**))

That looks great. Your shading is quite nice. I have to agree with Moodaddy on the looking like she is running. Although the more you look at it with the one bird at calf level you get a small sense.

You would maybe need to show the rest of her right foot, and maybe position her higher up. Where the blue meets the white area creates a horizon line, which is were you get the confusion. A lower horizon line or separation would give more of a flying fee along with carrying the blue down farther. Also with the lines of the clouds running across the page. Id break them up a bit. l. Hope that made sense.

The sky looks good I think. If you look at a clear blue sky you will notice it is darker above and graduates into a lighter blue.

Excellent work.

NatsuNatsu · (#43 (**permalink**))

Thank you again, NV! I love all your crits and comments ><

I will have other contest entries to show you all soon, so please check up from time to time!

NickVelvet · (#44 (**permalink**))

Glad that myself and others could be of some help. I look forward to seeing some more of your work.

miyavikuun · (#45 (**permalink**))

omg man you are really good i suck at backgrounds but you are spuer good there is no reason that you should lose

Moodaddy · (#46 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by NatsuNatsu

O_O That's even better! Thank you Moodaddy! <3333

you drawing makes me wanna go draw something again *sigh* now i suppose i must, i always got into bad moods if i didn't draw when i felt like i should ^^

NatsuNatsu · (#47 (**permalink**))

I'm so happy to help ><

Draw draw DRAW!

Then go out and buy my manga when I get it published >:3

Hoshichan · (#48 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by NatsuNatsu

Thank you NV! Your wish is my command!

Here she is, new and improved, colored and done...She was supposed to be in the sky...but when I showed my mom, she got a little confused and thought she was on the ground. She gave me some bad advice and told me to darken in the top with gray...Once I did it...I feel I ruined it...But Imma submit it this way anyway ;-;

Does she look like she's in the sky?

I'm trying to improve on the way I color ><

*squeeeee*
thats beautiful !

NatsuNatsu · (#49 (**permalink**))

You like it?

Took me forever! I just hope I win...I really like the rain boots >:3

Hoshichan · (#50 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by NatsuNatsu

You like it?

Took me forever! I just hope I win...I really like the rain boots >:3

I wish I
could color like that

T__T