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02-12-2008, 05:20 PM
Wow I've gotta say I'm impressed by all the creativity, and that was a great poem too Marlene. If you want you can check mine out in a previous post.
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02-12-2008, 05:34 PM
Thanks! I read it; it's very, very original.
This is a more recent one: Kim She's not for you yet pretty little thing aged thirteen still she plays with plastic dolls on a worn sofa the stench of old whiskey mixed with broccoli and dust somewhere in the promised land of lost Dreams she dreams of angels with crimson lipstick and axes behind their back Kim aged fourteen now she stomps on ants her bedroom vomits posters of rock stars but she won't forget to go to church every Sunday like her mom and her aunt and Dave who slaps his wife when his only white shirt stinks of his own sweat and old Jenna who doesn't understand why her kind and sweet boy grew up to become a drug zombie (since when has he had that hollow look in his eyes?) but yes she won't forget to go to church and daydream of someone's wet lips as she sings along with the chorus chastely- she doesn't know it yet but don't worry we're getting her ready for you, Future lover Future husband, soon we will present you with your very own Wasted Woman copyright Millennium to command. |
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02-12-2008, 06:06 PM
Yes Marlene they are both beautiful,I'm impressed sincerely...And yes Natsume ur's is beautiful as well....Well everyone feel free to post their poems here I look forward to reading them
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