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03-28-2008, 01:54 PM
i like all of you peoples poems. heres one that i just wrote......(sucks though)
I HAVE FALLEN I have fallen, Into a place of complete darkness, I cant find an outing. I begging to remember you less and less. Those wings that were on my back, Have finally faded, Turning the dark color of black. The very same happened to my crown, Its broken and it lay, Forgotten on the ground. I have always tried to save, Those who really need me, But it turns out I could not save myself, I have fallen, Into the darkest, Of places. Don’t try to save me.  THE SHINIGAMI CLAN! pm me if ya wanna be in it XrachelleX(miyuki)--the death master
emiluvsjmusic(emi)--the humanity taker SHELKE17(tears of blood)--the tearing heart auran(Hiugchi)--the cheer taker NejimaCrazy(Matser X)-sanity destroyer shinigami13(nemo)-memory hoader zachart(domogoto killa)-destroyer of light jene(angel without wings)-blue eyes dragon court jester of (_) Boring club (_) 
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03-28-2008, 06:21 PM
Nice work, both of you ^_^
I really liked your last one, Sphinx01   I'm pretty content with life right now....For the most part, anyway....Well, at least, I'm pretty sure I am....
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04-08-2008, 07:10 PM
Ever Changing Eyes Confused and ensnared by the allure of her gaze/ My thoughts ellipse a path around the seraphic beaty of her silhouette as we depart our seperate ways/ First green as emerald stars, lighting the center of heavens doorsteps/ Next hazel, seductively prying open the core of my masculince/ I’ve realized to late that now here I lie melted in ecstacy/ Exposed to a myriad of emotions contained in her eyes/ By Sphinx 04-0608
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04-23-2008, 06:29 PM
Yo here is what looks like it will be only a piece to a song I'm currently writing entitled weight of the world..check out and hope u will enjoy the finished project comming soon!!!!
Dealing with pain from the wounds inflicted by my attackers/ Cope with strain rested on the back of Atlas/ Aint nothin left in me/ Can't even stand up/ Layin in somethin out of this world/ Reachin my hads up/ 
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04-24-2008, 07:44 PM
Its hard to leave everything behind
But its a thing that i must do Whether i like it or not I just have to leave but not to say goodbye Please do not give up, just give me sometime and ill be back You should know how much i miss you Its not easy to think that you are there crying and grieving I pray to God that he make you strong Because we still need time to get along Wait for me so we can be the same as before I LOVE YOU and I MISS YOU that is waht you should know. PS: Dedicated for my friends and family in the Philippines, specially my MOM. Miss you so MUCH!
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04-25-2008, 12:51 PM
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04-28-2008, 06:15 PM
Meeting at the Bridge: From one to the next they appeared the same/ To the eyes of men/ But the traveler sees with blind sight And so each is recognized for it’s Own beauties and pleasures/ Each Presenting its own chance for freedom/ At last he approaches/ The mystery of a world Enchanted by its own allure/ Seeing in itself A dark serenity/…And there she stood- Beckoning Him without words or gestures…not even a gaze to Acknowledge his presence/ He spoke…she returned His words with small conversation/ He bowed- and Thus she allowed him to enter her world…if only for a short time/ From one to the next they appeared the same/ To the eyes of men/ All the same but this/ This offered beauty…this One offered adventure/ This offered him a glimpse Of the Goddess in her world/ However brief his stay- The traveler would call this world home/ Though he sought other World…to this he returned..always
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04-28-2008, 07:30 PM
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wow nice Sphinx01 now I am speachless.
I offer you my pride and my dreams, have them all. 
