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here is a bunch of poems i wrote -
01-15-2008, 09:56 PM
tell me if they are any good or not,please
 Lonely Lonely I sit here waiting, knowing that I’m safe But as I sit here I long for something more, I’m so lonely sitting here I just want to be free, I want to laugh and smile I want to be together forever Just you and I I want to stop being lonely, to be happy I want to be together with you forever Smiling and laughing together My overflowing feelings are tearing me apart On the inside I want to scream I seem fine but it’s all an act I’m so lonely here in the dark …waiting I’m so lonely here waiting for the sun to shine again Please … save me Night wish Night falls and the creatures of the night awaken In the dark you walk, unaware of your newly awaiting fate Girls and boys are their favorite treats Hungrily they wait, hiding in the shadows Their faces hidden in the darkness, stalking their unsuspecting prey Who knows you may be next, you never know till it’s too late Into the darkness you walk, unaware that you’re being hunted Silently they go unnoticed Hissssss….your dead Misery beast There is a beast Hiding deep within your minds cemetery In the shadows of your heart he feasts He is the beast of misery Dreams long since deceased To you and me he is a mystery Your pain released Your misery is harvested for his butchery Feeding off your despair Demons Demons Sly and cunning Pain causers and killers Instilling fear in the heart Daimon Death Death Cold as ice, Pale as snow, blood no longer flowing Alive but not, undead Vampire Undead, alive but not Blood no longer flowing, pale as snow Cold as ice Death Starry night Under the starry night I lay listen to the night sounds I hear the monster creeping and the crickets chirping Owls hooting and rats scurrying Under the starry night sky I sit Waiting for the sun to shine one last time I don’t want die here As I lay under the cherry blossoms I pray that I go unnoticed For fear I might become a demons feast Under the starry night sky I sit Waiting for the sun to shine one last time I don’t want die here In the distance I hear howling I hear loud desperate screams Then I realize that I too am screaming I scream ….. Some one save me please…………. Then I see him standing in the shadows His eyes gleaming and hair shimmering in the moonlight Under the starry night sky I sit Waiting for the sun to shine one last time I don’t want die here……….. Vampire kisses Vampire kisses and werewolf tears Long ago in a far away place vampires and werewolves were at war Fighting a never ending battle to overpower the other Neither group could agree on any thing Vampires thought the werewolves were nothing but savage beasts Werewolves didn’t like the way the vampire treated them The war would have lasted for all eternity if not for one brave vampire boy His name you ask? His name is Wild A complete opposite of his personality Wild is very calm and quite intelligent too Wild is the youngest of his race A mere twenty years old Wild is tired of all the fighting One dark and foggy night –the night of the new moon no werewolves tonight He sneaks out of his castle He’s going to end this war even if it costs him his undead life He walks through poison fang forest Were he meets the most beautiful non-vampire he has ever seen It was like love at first sight Wild walks up to her And she turns ready to attack Wild looks into her golden eyes and she looks into Wild’s silver She introduces herself She is Sora Wild asks if she’s a werewolf Are you a vampire Sora asks in return Yes Wild answers Their you go that’s my answer To be continued………………. Foxfire Playing in Blood Fang forest he’ll steal your heart Then he’ll tear it out Sometimes he is a man walking about He’ll tear you apart A flaming fox A tall red haired man Your death is his plan He’ll send you your heart in a box His fire shimmering in the moonlight You’re in despair When you saw him it set your heart a flare You await the daylight You wait in fear Your end is near As we lay here with the broken body Our special guest now is bloody With a painful silence Comes the violence On the floor the crow screams in a bloody rage “You’ve killed the new age” While the raven sings a lovely tune 
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01-15-2008, 10:03 PM
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01-15-2008, 10:55 PM
heh heh thanks
As we lay here with the broken body Our special guest now is bloody With a painful silence Comes the violence On the floor the crow screams in a bloody rage “You’ve killed the new age” While the raven sings a lovely tune
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01-16-2008, 12:05 AM
thank you
As we lay here with the broken body Our special guest now is bloody With a painful silence Comes the violence On the floor the crow screams in a bloody rage “You’ve killed the new age” While the raven sings a lovely tune
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