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02-05-2008, 05:55 PM
Very cool. Looking forward to work with you someday.
 Sorry man this week is rhyming week here on J. Forum and it was pretty nice, hope you have 6 on both dice Man I'm busy as hell. Hit me up on MSN or pm me.
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02-05-2008, 07:47 PM
Wow thanks everyone I'm glad u all liked it, and I guess I'll be posting more soon, and Yeah Thunda I'd like to work with u 2, hope u win the contest bruh
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02-05-2008, 08:08 PM
By the way if anymore of u have myspace, then add me as a friend
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02-05-2008, 09:30 PM
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On MS I added you as a friend hope u check it out in the end Man I'm busy as hell. Hit me up on MSN or pm me.
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02-06-2008, 03:36 AM
ayo thunda thanks 4 that Bruh...And as for everyone I hope u all check out my upcoming mixtape "Meditative Millitants vol1:Insurgency"
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02-06-2008, 10:07 PM
MySpace.com - Sphinx Da God - COLUMBIA, South Carolina - Hip Hop / Rap / Alternative - www.myspace.com/youngsphinx
Yo check out the "ridicuolus" track
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02-06-2008, 10:58 PM
hey Sphinx01, nicely done on that track dude.. im feelin it for real. Your voice is smooth and flow nice with the beat, i gotta say the instrumental was deep and promotes deep thinking, the lyrics goes well with the beat. Your voice sounds like the late Legend Big L, thats why i am so intrigued. But dont get it twisted, im not trying to define your style... your lyrics are unique and you have a smooth crisp flow thats what makes you nice for a rookie, what can i say? You have potential.
i gotta say, sorry to be the critic man; but the recording was pretty bad, not bad to the point it makes the track whack, but bad to the point your lyrics were hard to make out, and im a good listener. Your sequencing wasnt right there, as a poster said before me.. be smart when transitioning from rap to talking, heres a tip (im a rookie producer by the way), to make the conversation or voice overs stand out, add effects such as echo, pan, transpose.. do it all using good music softwares such as cubase and cakewalk. Also slow down with the voices, leave a few moments for the people to think on it and breath, you throwing deep lines and not allowing us to have a few moments to take in your words, you nah mean? This track has potential to be a 5 min track if you add a chorus and a few hooks. All in All, i like your style.. nice lyrics and metaphors and your flow has potential.. keep it up. "trust is obsolete so my heart considers it deleted" "if i dont dance with the weapon the battle is done" do what you love doing, Hold tight Sphinx01 im down with real hiphop   2006 - Japanforum, remember it.
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