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For anyone who likes Hip-Hop -
02-05-2008, 12:54 AM
Yo if any one out there listens to rap, please check my song and tell me if you like it or not...honest opinions appreciated. "One LUV"
 MySpace.com - Sphinx Da God - COLUMBIA, South Carolina - Hip Hop / Rap / Alternative - www.myspace.com/youngsphinx 
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02-05-2008, 01:03 AM
I hope u guys enjoy it
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02-05-2008, 01:06 AM
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 "Im too drunk to taste this chicken" - colonel sanders
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02-05-2008, 01:15 AM
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02-05-2008, 01:25 AM
yes I luv to rap over all kinds of beats..and I love challenging myself to write thought provoking lyrics
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02-05-2008, 01:35 AM
I will and thanks ...Sounds like ur a new fan huh?
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02-05-2008, 01:56 AM
I noticed you used Aruarian Dance from Nujabes lol
I love NUJABES! I'm a big follower of hip hop so I may come off blunt. The lyrics were good, I can tell you put thought into it, but it doesn't feel genuine to me, what you rap about, it sounds generic in a sense that anyone can rhyme.... don't take it too personally, I know youre starting out, but overall it was okay. I like your voice for one, your flow is pretty good but just the lyrics didn't really affect me or anything which is something I expect for using Aruarian Dance! That beat has so much depth in the loop itself. As I said, overall it was okay and I do think your flow is smooth. Just a little advice though, I know it as just a demo, but when you use random noises like talking or laughing, you might want to transition it a bit smoother. It was hard to listen to the middle of the song when you guys start talking randomly. I see what you're trying to do though, alot of rap songs have a conversational transition, but you really have to make it work. Anyway sorry again if I come off a bit strong, but I am a hip hop JUNKY, and I won't let it go too easily xP You are an aspiring artist though, keep doing what you do and you'll improve.  "hey souljah boy, can i.... YAHH TRICK YAHHH!!!!!"
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02-05-2008, 02:03 AM
Hey thanks and I'll keep this in mind...and no hard feelings, In fact I'm glad u caught the instrumental, so thank u for words
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I offer you my pride and my dreams, have them all. 
did you really make this song? It sounds great I love it I could listen to it everyday ^_^ well except for the part where the two guys keep laughing and talking but the beat is sooo nice
