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04-15-2008, 11:51 PM

TEARS
That red rose,
The one you gave me so long ago,
I now hold it in my hand,
The rain pours down,
Everyone’s forgotten memories,
Scattered among the ground,
they wont come back,
they only bring back sad images.
Tears slip down the corners of my face,
Please, can something fill this empty space,
That lies within my heart?
It used to be you,
But your gone now leaving me behind,
Your moving on…
And im being left here alone,.
Your finally in the other life,
It was sad that it had to end with a knife,
The tears keep coming,
Because it was only you I could not save,
Now that rose you once gave me,
Has now turned black as death,
And it has slowly fallen to your grave.



THE SHINIGAMI CLAN!
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XrachelleX(miyuki)--the death master
emiluvsjmusic(emi)--the humanity taker
SHELKE17(tears of blood)--the tearing heart
auran(Hiugchi)--the cheer taker
NejimaCrazy(Matser X)-sanity destroyer
shinigami13(nemo)-memory hoader
zachart(domogoto killa)-destroyer of light
jene(angel without wings)-blue eyes dragon
court jester of (_) Boring club (_)

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grrrr to you too buddy!
 
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04-16-2008, 03:57 AM

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Great lyrics!
Thank you! I really like your poem "keep your chin up"!




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04-16-2008, 03:59 AM

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TEARS
That red rose,
The one you gave me so long ago,
I now hold it in my hand,
The rain pours down,
Everyone’s forgotten memories,
Scattered among the ground,
they wont come back,
they only bring back sad images.
Tears slip down the corners of my face,
Please, can something fill this empty space,
That lies within my heart?
It used to be you,
But your gone now leaving me behind,
Your moving on…
And im being left here alone,.
Your finally in the other life,
It was sad that it had to end with a knife,
The tears keep coming,
Because it was only you I could not save,
Now that rose you once gave me,
Has now turned black as death,
And it has slowly fallen to your grave.
That was an intense poem. I love how you ended it!




as small as a world and as large as alone

~+MeMbEr Of ThE VaMpIrE cLaN+~
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04-16-2008, 05:00 AM

Just the cross
its all I can bear
the weight of my heavy heart
drags me to the ground
the feeling in my chest
vibrates all around
throbbing pain
I can decieve
my heart is longing
for what it cant recieve
why did you leave me, here to die
pale blue eyes still looking for you
drowning in a sea of red
my blood is spilt
running away
even it leaves me to die
this one last moment
my very last day

I was bored, this was random..so...HA! xD


the real truth is often the one we dont want to hear
i am the tears that fall, you are the blood on my skin, we are mingled forever again, here we stand, hand in hand, but ill let go when my time has come, time for u to fly alone
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04-17-2008, 11:45 PM

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That was an intense poem. I love how you ended it!
thank you. its very much appreciated!

yeah and heres another one.

AGAIN
i guess you now have the right to say,
that it was a waste.
That my efforts were just thrown away.
I wanted you to be happy,
I really did.
I didn’t want to hurt you,
But I guess I don’t have the power,
The power to save from the darkness.
I want to return you to the light.
And never let you out of my sight.
You always seem to fall,
Into the darkest of places,
And ive have always been there to pull you out.
Im afraid that this time I was to late.
I will try once more,
I wont let you see that golden gate.
Not yet.
I found the ladder,
Go ahead give it a try.
Ill be right under you,
Helping you up,
Every step off the way.
But the unthinkable happened.
You fell off that ladder,
When you were nearly at the top.
That image still makes my heart stop.
I grabbed your hand,
To make sure you didn’t fall,
I sighed in relief,
You smiled at me.
I pulled you up,
Up to the ladder,
You stood there,
And just stared.
I asked what was wrong.
But what a foolish thing to ask.
You smiled again ,
And asked me to do the same.
I realized what was going on,
And held onto your shirt.
“let go” you said.
I shook my head and squeaked out a “no”.
You grabbed my hand and yanked it off.
You looked at me again and smiled.
The same smile that haunted me to that day.
The one that still does today,
“well at least smile when im gone, every now and again.
To show me your happy,
Just do me a favor,
And don’t forget me”
You kissed my cheek.
Then you jumped into the darkness.
Maybe…just maybe…
If I had said something then…….
I would still be able to see you again.



THE SHINIGAMI CLAN!
pm me if ya wanna be in it

XrachelleX(miyuki)--the death master
emiluvsjmusic(emi)--the humanity taker
SHELKE17(tears of blood)--the tearing heart
auran(Hiugchi)--the cheer taker
NejimaCrazy(Matser X)-sanity destroyer
shinigami13(nemo)-memory hoader
zachart(domogoto killa)-destroyer of light
jene(angel without wings)-blue eyes dragon
court jester of (_) Boring club (_)

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04-19-2008, 10:22 PM

This is just a song I wrote for a writing project

Life progresses so slow

I asked her what she
Knew, because I
Needed to know what
Everyone was
Saying
About me
She told me, with a look of
Darkness
"You shouldn't know what I
Heard them saying
Because I wish I never knew."
I asked her,
"What do they think?"
She said, "You
Don't want to know.
Life progresses so slow.
But it's not always
What it seems."


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04-20-2008, 03:11 PM

I wrote this thinking of someone that killed themselves and the people that caused it. Not that I actually know someone like this *shifty eyes*

We thought we knew you

We thought we knew you.
We thought you were stronger;
We thought we could get away with it.
We thought you wouldn't mind.
Now, we see what happened
And we have been forever changed.
We could even say we miss you
But you certainly won't miss us.
At least that we know.
If you were still with us,
Would we still act as if
You were not important
To the world?

In your memory,

Those who want to be forgiven.



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04-21-2008, 02:33 AM

Great words everyone. Really hits home.


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04-22-2008, 01:24 PM

What is this world?
はるみ すみこ

What is this world
Of nothing less than evil
Of nothing less than good
What is this world
Of dreams
And reality
What is this world
In which we live
In which we survive
For a long time
If not forever
What is this world?


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04-23-2008, 02:23 AM

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What is this world?
はるみ すみこ

What is this world
Of nothing less than evil
Of nothing less than good
What is this world
Of dreams
And reality
What is this world
In which we live
In which we survive
For a long time
If not forever
What is this world?
Yes, this is true - very insightful! It keeps our hearts beating for sure.


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