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05-24-2008, 05:46 PM
k here are a couple of mine
Dream Forever Life is but a dream, it isn't as real as you want it to be. But sometimes dreams are all we really have left. Decay Drifting, violent, sobbing screams. Erie laughterm haunting dreams. Creeping fears, falling tears. Arriving in the darkness after such sudden light, then in Yelling, fury the last of my hope starts to decay... Insanity Instintly my life is over locked in this room. Nothing seems real as the Sorrow comes to play... Again. I thought it was gone. No, I guess it never was. I was mistaken To think that Your love could ease me insanity. 
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05-31-2008, 05:29 PM
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05-31-2008, 05:59 PM
Scarlet Blood
I'm dying inside, and nobody cares. Can't somebody come save me? Deep scarlet drops, fall to the floor, I'm dying inside. Nobody sees the tears I cry, cause I always hide, before they see my eyes. I want to live, but don't know how. So for now, I relish the pain, this sharp blade brings, watching the dark scarlet drops, drip to the floor. I'm dying inside, you will never know. Know I lay, dead on the floor. I gave in to the pain, cut to deep. I made the mistake, all those other teens made. Did you not believe me, When I said goodbye? I will never see tomorrow, as my world goes black. Scarlet blood around me, as I say my last goodbye.
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05-31-2008, 09:12 PM
Heres a funny one-
On top of a mountain All covered in trees that lost all it's people when attacked by a chimpanzee They ran down the mountain and straight through the park and reach the hotel just right before dark Some people got rooms some slept in the lounge some actually slept and others stayed up singing campfire songs Oh they sang so loud they woke up the crowd and early next morning they got kicked out Tey were forced back to the mountain attacked by the chimpanzee so let's just say for now they are hiding in the trees so next time you climb a mountain attacked by a chimpanzee just run to the hotel but don't you dare sing.
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05-31-2008, 10:35 PM
Too many and I want to show them all >.< Here's a few short ones to start:
None of them have titles: A break from the rest It sparkles and shines Surface unbroken The moon in its eyes Like cool, molten glass It bends to her hand Testing the waters Alone in the sand A dip and it's over The ripples recede Swallowed her whole Alone in the reeds. ~♥ ~♥ A single diamond in a sea of stone A bittersweet beauty Solitary, alone Buried deep Deep inside Its shimmering splendor Behind closed eyes As it rolled down her cheek Screaming truth with such grace She looked out at the world A smile on her face. ~♥ ~♥ Like a wave hits the shore She broke down on the floor Like the incoming tide Tears flooded her eyes Out flowed the crimson The tears from her heart Like the letter he wrote It has been torn apart She reached for the knife Cold steel pressing down The red kiss of life It freed her, let her drown. ~♥ ~♥ That's it for now... Though I have at least one more I'd like to post, I'll post it later  Please tell me what you think ^.^
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05-31-2008, 10:45 PM
Mm.. here's that other one right now actually.
I attached it because it would be an annoyingly long post. It's a poem that I wrote for lit a while ago... not my usual style but I personally love the topic ^.^ Called "Smile"
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06-01-2008, 05:22 PM
Tsukimoon, I like your writing. I skipped the post with "Smiles" because that title just sounded like something I didn't care to read. But after reading the short three, I decided it might be worth reading. All four are good.
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