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03-22-2008, 12:10 PM

WOW! All these talanted people on here! Great poem! Keep writting!


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People for the most part have become very self centered, they want to be in the spotlight, we have alot of good things we can add, yet they feel the need
to be in the center. You know what? Let them, for we are the better people. They are people without any real depth. We can know that we are the special ones that care, and are sensative people, The light ones, the kind who can change the world!... We are each like a thread that binds everyone together like a beautiful tapastry. I wish the world would understand this...
Mitcheru
Ah, so beautiful... I wish I had known this before...


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03-22-2008, 12:28 PM

I do use the name Harumi Sumiko for most of my writing, so maybe I could share parts of it with you.


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Here's another:

How Wrong We All Were

はるみ すみこ

You said that you liked him
As a friend
You thought he wouldn't leave you
He would stay forever
You said you would die for him
You thought he wouldn't mind
You knew no friendship remains untested
You thought it would stay strong
You found a way into his life
You thought he didn't care
How wrong you were.
How wrong we all were.

I wish you didn't leave me
I wish I didn't hurt so badly
I wish it could have ended long ago
When it wasn't so strong.
And I know there is no use wishing
But I do not care
For I would rather be without
Any more pain
That penetrates my heart.


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03-22-2008, 02:47 PM

It's beautiful. In my many years and many losses of love, I can understand that pain. We can make the pain a bridge we can cross so we can meet the true right person for us. When we become stronger inside we will become ready to meet that person. So ride out the storm, a new day will dawn!


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It's beautiful. In my many years and many losses of love, I can understand that pain. We can make the pain a bridge we can cross so we can meet the true right person for us. When we become stronger inside we will become ready to meet that person. So ride out the storm, a new day will dawn!
You must be the most inspiring person I know...

As I say, you don't have to be torn apart to write a song. I hope I can be more uplifting later in my life.


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03-22-2008, 02:52 PM

Why.....are you the one..
who catches me when i fall down on the ground..

It's like living in an dream....Wich never ends..

But the next day..I really fell...
and u didnt catch me...

DOUSHITEEEEE?

The last time we saw eachother..
U looked at me with full hate..

But then i still ask..
Why u look at me...

Like that..

U tried to kill people..
But u still didn't cause i believe in you!..

Why would u kill people?
Cause u never felt true love?

But still you are..
My own...Fallen Angel...

I won't care...
If you hurt me...

I won't care...
If you hate me...

I would care if u didn't love me...

It's cause..
We are living in a dream wich is never ending.


(Posting more later my head is starting to break when ima thinking now XD..wrighting a song with a headache=baaaad)


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Why.....are you the one..
who catches me when i fall down on the ground..

It's like living in an dream....Wich never ends..

But the next day..I really fell...
and u didnt catch me...

DOUSHITEEEEE?

The last time we saw eachother..
U looked at me with full hate..

But then i still ask..
Why u look at me...

Like that..

U tried to kill people..
But u still didn't cause i believe in you!..

Why would u kill people?
Cause u never felt true love?

But still you are..
My own...Fallen Angel...

I won't care...
If you hurt me...

I won't care...
If you hate me...

I would care if u didn't love me...

It's cause..
We are living in a dream wich is never ending.


(Posting more later my head is starting to break when ima thinking now XD..wrighting a song with a headache=baaaad)
It's great. keep posting more!!


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You must be the most inspiring person I know...

As I say, you don't have to be torn apart to write a song. I hope I can be more uplifting later in my life.
Yes your right, life has it's ups and downs like a roller coaster! lol!
Remember the good times helps us when we are down. Inspiring, I'm just older, I guess lived life and I'm still learning it's lessons!


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03-22-2008, 05:27 PM

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Yes your right, life has it's ups and downs like a roller coaster! lol!
Remember the good times helps us when we are down. Inspiring, I'm just older, I guess lived life and I'm still learning it's lessons!

life is a roller coaster...currently all the songs/poems i wrote were because people are dumb when it comes to the fact that you care for them...but currently i guess in a weird way i couldnt be happier that im alone... its weird but i dont know how to explain it ...
my sister just went through like two boyfriends in a span of two days but i'm so glad im alone because i dont have to go through that every day.




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