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03-31-2008, 02:19 AM

To and From---a poem by Jaclyn J.

Around the world she goes
Traveling from one place to the other
Home to home
Family to family
Scratches and bruises are visible,
And she cries when no one's around
Life on the road
Had been so cruel,
Life in a home,
Was even worse
Beaten and scarred,
were her memories.
Open and bleeding were her wounds.
Comas and death ran in her family.
To soft a heart,
For a girl like her.
For all she's been through,
Can take a toll on this young girl's thoughts.
House to house
School to school.
Won't anyone love her?
State to county
County to town
Town to country.
She finally finds a home.
Far and wide she's gone,
To find a family like mine.
She's finally found,
That love really exists.
For it's not just the person,
It's really their heart.


I know...it's not all that good but I try
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03-31-2008, 07:52 PM

Waiting For You

I am standing here
Waiting for you
I know you won't
Notice me
I know you
May not care
But I stay here
And wait for you to pass
Because I hope
To make a difference
And it's the only
Way I can

When I greet you
I am hoping
It can help to take away
The feelings
I had toward you
That were not
Ones I liked

I hope you have
Forgiven me
For I have not
Forgotten
The friendship
We might have shared


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04-01-2008, 03:56 PM

Another great one, Kajitsu!!


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04-01-2008, 07:28 PM

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Another great one, Kajitsu!!
Thank you (;

I wish we were still friends, the person that inspired it and I.


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04-03-2008, 07:55 PM

One Last Time

はるみ すみこ

Can I look into your eyes
One last time
As I often
Have Before?
Can I set my gaze on yours
One last time
And see you
Looking back at me?
Can I look into my past
One last time
And know
What I did wrong?
Can I see up to the sky
One last time
Before I leave behind my dreams
Forever?


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04-06-2008, 08:05 PM

MitcheruOtaku? Are you here? I haven't heard from you for a while...


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04-09-2008, 01:13 AM

I'm back. I haven't been around for awhile. I'll check more often.
Your writtings are awesome!


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Hoorah! Thank you!


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04-09-2008, 06:56 PM

im here too gladly...great poems all :]
i actually submitted "carbon Monoxide" into the local poetry contest :] my mom said it was good and all my friends thought i should submit something so i did...




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04-11-2008, 12:32 AM

She told you once that she liked you

and you took that to heart.

She told you once that she'd miss you

and you took that to heart.

She told you once that you're her world

and you said you took that to heart.

She told you once she'd never leave

and yet you took that to heart.

She told you once she loved you

and you took that to heart.



She asked you once do you love me?

You answered of course I do.

She asked you once why'd you do it?

You answered I had no choice.

She told you once she'd never leave you

but she couldn't stand you.

She told you once she loved you

and she thought it was true.

She told you once that she didn't want to lose you

but you took her down and left her there.

She told you once that she'd die without

and you didn't believe.

She saw you once with that other girl

and she went home and died.

She told you once she loved you

but you didn't take it to heart.



this is one of my other poems if u ever read it




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