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Anyone want to show off song-writing or poetry? -
03-16-2008, 02:00 PM
What do you think of this?
So Give Me a Black Rose はるみ すみこ You hurt me so badly I'll never forget I wondered what happened I think I will never know You sing me your sweet song And drag me away Sneak into the darkness To where you left me So give me a black rose The symbol of death Wish I was never here Because I no longer care My heart has been shattered You left it that way Wounded and torn apart As if there was No other answer I know what a friend is It's no longer you I miss when I liked how Your kindness was with me But I do not Want it anymore If ever you want me I reject your request You say to me why you Were not there when I needed you the most And maybe I forgive you But most likely not For I do not want your Deception and lies I will add more to it later 
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03-18-2008, 10:56 PM
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i call it tears of blood...  Pagan Pride We are the orginal Christians 
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03-18-2008, 11:03 PM
Tears of blood
The tears of blood roll down my cheek. You ripped my heart out of my chest could you have just left it there? Why did you have to tear it out? the drops of blood fall down my chest. my heart in your hand you ripped it to peices why don't you shred it up cant you just throw it away that hole in my chest cant you just allow me to bleed to death? please just leave me here to die but dont rip my heart to shreds. the drops of blood fall down my chest. my heart in your hand you ripped it to peices why don't you shred it up cant you just throw it away the blood falls from my chest just let me die lay me in the ground bury my heart with me the tears stream down my cheek my heart is on the ground the drops of blood fall from my chest my heart was in your hand why did you shred it up did you have to throw it away please give me your heart allow me to mend this hole give me your heart i need it so please dont leave i dont want to be alone. tell me what you think  Pagan Pride We are the orginal Christians
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03-19-2008, 06:11 PM
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03-19-2008, 06:21 PM
Here are a couple of mine:
I saw Your Face I saw your face again. Just a glance at a photo of you, And my heart ached, so hard and fast. I had to catch my breath and look away. Before tears came. ______________________________ I Saw Red I saw red once, in a beautiful sunset. In an early morning sunrise. in the beautiful Autumn trees. I saw red once, in the color of a beautiful woman's hair. She told me she loved me, once. I will always remember in my heart, how beautiful. by Mitcheru Lee
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03-19-2008, 07:17 PM
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im never did something like that but im sur i'd suck ^_^;
