CoolNard's Freestyling: Corresponding Sounds

[CoolNard]

By freestyle, I'm imposing a policy of unbounded themes in my poems.
By corresponding, I'm implementing the principle of rhyming in them as well.

It's either me, or most of the poems hereupon have pessimistic-builds written all over their words? Seeming as my personality dictates I like being unique, why not post the contrary?

I'm gonna post every poem I've ever created here albeit some of these you might have already read on the "rhyming madness" thread started but unfinished by Excessum... (whom I want to thank anyway )
The quantity of my work may seem insignificant, in comparison to many, but it's quality over quantity, right? I only developed an interest in poetry quite recently... Lemme see... The first real poem I made was during... Christmas last year!

The rain of snowdrops
however dazzling
can never match the wonders
your one smile can bring
Like the frosty wind
that sweeps through the lands
I'm lost in your hands
your delicate touch
which even joy and pain
can never express
Over a Christmas
how lovely you've grown
Over the New Year
the care that you've shown
You live in my heart
across my mind and soul
Swim into my eyes
my love is just & real
My thumping heartbeat cries
can you feel its call?
The red roses fall
they're pleading with me
Their reflections sparkle
on this ring I present
Lighting up your face
casting winter's descent
Behold a new dawn's phase
So I'll be your rainbow
and together we'll bound
our destinies around
on our shooting star

Will you be mine?

So it's a wee bit mawkish; I don't care xD

[Thunda]

Are copyrighting us boss??? X)
Errrm I mean great job boss!!!! X)))))))


Um, I can't copyright you guys because I wasn't that thread's owner, nor am I granting it any legal authority to exclusive rights... ^_^;

If you mean plagiarizing, lol, then I certainly can't plagiarize my own products can I?

P.S. I ain't your boss, lol! XD However flattered that may make me

[CoolNard]

Yup, pretty much the only 'emo' poem I've ever written. =/ First time for everything? ^_^;

The Dreading

Uncontrollable vengeance
Fighting the impulse to restrain
Knowing anger and grievance
This is my never-ending pain

Feel my dreading

Clenching my fists
Challenging glares
Rage is just the gist
Of my gritted bare

Feel my dreading

Wanting to stop it
To just freeze everything
Comes back to haunt me
Coldness of the worlds sing

Feel my dreading

Death makes its descend
Ever-impending doom
The prophecy of end
Hidden in the gloom

Feel my dreading

Hatred manipulates
Trapped in one's body
The darkness escalates
Can't struggle to break free

Feel my dreading

Tales of the dead
Awaking the worst
Resisting my fate
Unable to curse

Feel my dreading

One last hope
Life seeps in
Trying to grope
Mere helpless grin

Feel my dreading

Falling out of love
That hope is now lost
As my bleeding heart lurks
In the shadows of yours

I dread...

[pumpum]

thats ok i read it and in my mind i got a beat - it went quite well !!


Haha, I intended for a rhythm there. I'm glad someone noticed Thanks!

[Thunda]

Originally Posted by Thunda

Are copyrighting us boss??? X)
Errrm I mean great job boss!!!! X)))))))


Um, I can't copyright you guys because I wasn't that thread's owner, nor am I granting it any legal authority to exclusive rights... ^_^;

If you mean plagiarizing, lol, then I certainly can't plagiarize my own products can I?

P.S. I ain't your boss, lol! XD However flattered that may make me

Nah boss, whoever can ban me I call them boss, boss.

As a poem, it is more than perfect. lol. But as a rap, I tried to rap it, and I couldnt really. But I likes, boss!

errm so we can post freestyles here, boss?

[CoolNard]

Originally Posted by Thunda

Nah boss, whoever can ban me I call them boss, boss.

As a poem, it is more than perfect. lol. But as a rap, I tried to rap it, and I couldnt really. But I likes, boss!

errm so we can post freestyles here, boss?

Lol, I didn't mean it to be a rap anyway xD

So, my subordinate , I'm open to others' freestyles, but then an aspect of the thread would be digressed a little... Oh well, I don't mind frankly

[CoolNard]

As some of you may have noticed, I'm an idealist about the issues of love I don't care who dictates what, ever-lasting true relationships exist then, and they exist now!

My Irreplaceable

The very first night I was away
There were feelings which were kept at bay
I was speechless; melting into tears
All I had were angst and fears

Nonetheless I stared into space…
To a joyful crowd of gay laughter
Wanting just us, in a daze
Only us, in embrace

By contemplating, I found myself
Trying to reach into my profound thought
Discovering, like a newborn calf
At last grasping what I sought

Something that felt willfully wrong
One of the reasons that make me strong
Something…
Someone was missing…

(Then I recalled our chats over the phone
I couldn’t stop joking and laughing
Blushing secretly behind my tone
Just us alone…

Recalled my lying in bed at a certain phase
Watching the twinkles of a starlit sky
Surely I would sleep with a smile on my face
For I had us to enjoy when I lie)

…Someone who fills bareness in my heart
And making it complete as sun and moon
Then with a Cheshire cat’s smile I swoon
Sitting in my seat so warm and sweet
Because every little thing links back to one…

You... hun

[CoolNard]

This wasn't something I could cook up on my own; it was truly inspired. Kinda harsh way, but here's my comprehension on our utilization of reality. It's like viewing your subconsciousness from a third person perspective. o.o

Reasons of Reality

We fight because we are scared of the fighting
Causing deaths from all the constant fights
Killing from fear of them destroying
Never looking at ourselves in the same sights

We rise to power because of false pretenses
Both becoming a stool for recognition
Forging a tool for manipulation
Needed to judge wars of opposition

We get enraged because we see goals fade
Only to live on just for the dead
Making us blind to those not slain
Thus losing those friends whom we can gain

We start to mourn because of regret
Sinking deeper into deception's net
When by then it will be too late
To walk through the path of heaven's gate

We look behind because at any rate
Misery and confusion lie in wait
Suddenly a miracle sets its weight
Upon the souls of our dying lives

We begin crying because hope maybe near
Or at least hallucinations are beautiful?
The flower-scattered verdant grassland, it’s so clear
No blood, no hate, not one drop of a tear

We continue praying because of love
Gazing at the soaring flight of a dove
Something has enlightened us from within
Mindful of what Mother Nature wove

We finally smile because at the end of the day
Reality has truly rendered us helpless
Knowing that we are given no more, no less
Always its reasons shall possess the final say

[CoolNard]

Teared up a little doing it. Every single detail holds true to this day. For the record, this is my current masterpiece, amateurishly speaking ^^

Eternal Remembrance: Childhood's First Love

In the very first moment I laid eyes on you
My heart found and bloomed into a love so true
How young we were alive with pure innocence
I was hovering between newfound emotions
Your name, your voice, completed with your essence
Why couldn't I speak of your name with perfections?
How was I always so clumsy around your voice?
Yet, during those times I had been, without a pout
Never more happier and proud of my choice
That single glance I knew was born from fate's layout

It wasn't until that day, that I greeted you
The day when Mr. Low sat us together
"Um... Hello..." I said with a shy smile on my hue
Wondering if my hair was of a major jeer
On seeing you ignored me; it seemed like a cue
To hurl everything which I dreamt I could tell
But then you looked at me, for the first time as well
For a while, I was pelted by cupids' arrows
From then our relationship was set on their bows
To explore the verdict of destiny's trial

During weeks on end I was truly overjoyed
Like any student who did great in their exams
... No, This was different, I could never be void
Of claiming my righteous feelings; preventing jams <<(depicting I couldn't move on without her)
Regardless of how long passed or the games I received
Because everyday in class of you I perceived
Every problem assigned to us, we achieved
We were one and the same with each passing time
And still I dared not confess to you on a dime
What method to use - probably sing a rhyme?

Alas regret preceded orchestrating thoughts
This I had never counted on to happen
Naiveness had me down, saying forever nots
Being conned by my heart occured then, at the often
Beginning with a switch in seating arrangement
Mulltiplied when you talked to another guy
Conversing intimately just as you and I
Cowardice overwhelmed my weak jealousy
Even then, my feelings remained unknown to me
As I watched your smiling face vanishing from my life
(^^^ the last two sentences of this stanza symbolizes my hesitation to let her go although she was happy, just incase =D)

Followed by a change from you in next year's classes
I was determined to kick all their asses
Desperate to rejoin you once more hand in hand
Striving toward success was all I had planned
Things like water, food and air were secondary
Couldn't afford to lose a focus or worry
Another try was all I wanted and needed
Just one more attempt I had only required
Lo and behold! My efforts paid off drastically
Seeing you after what felt like a century

I kept waiting for you in class to relight our spark
Enduring pure torture so wrenchingly aching
This tongue of mine was compassing on escaping
When at this point, a friend came sneaking with a bark (tree)
With a message containing something from you to me
Aimed at throwing insulting & hurtful comments
Blinded by rage, I assumed that you had mocked me
So I craved to reciprocate what gave my heart dents
Upon submitting my insensitive reply
That friend laughed and told me he had played my head

I couldn't believe my own words, and before I knew it
Everyone in class was pointing and chuckling
Except you... You just sat there, not responding
While the class bullies displayed my confession
Writing it on the white board amidst confusion
I was held down by the rest of the students
Suddenly, the teacher walked in, her face in anger
She scolded me for not maintaing order
Since I was responsible... I was class monitor
After which she removed my position to restrain

The year ended fast, there was nothing I could do
Situations where I could make amends wouldn't brew
You never looked at me again, only thing I knew
My parents and sibling teased saying "puppy love"
But if I loved you until now, would it still be?
Countless grief-filled nights lacked me of peaceful sleep
Dreams of so near yet so far; reasons I couldn't see
Tears streamed down when I closed my eyes, it wasn't fair...
Even as I'm writing this, I can't help but ponder
If I'll meet you again to utter a sorry

Well, so much for my life story...

[MusicLuver]

oh wow...that was truly amazing CoolNard, even though it happened to you in real life (which I am sorry for), but that was my favorite out of the four. Keep up the awesome work :]

Thanks ML, coming from you, that means a lot. I'll continue to give my utmost!