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I want your honest opinion - 05-17-2008, 09:51 PM

i've just recently gotten bored and have finished a few fanarts and am looking for honest critics.

George Koizumi from Paradise kiss


Minato Namikaze from Naruto


Edward Elric


Twilight book cover


Orochimaru


"I can see it when you come alive, it's no surprise that you're leaving.every night when you close your eyes, lying there just breathing.I know, you know, this ain't the way to be living. I tried, you tried, to find a way to believe in. All this time, we've been giving in. Hold on,but it's dragging you down! Can you save me? Can you save me? I know it's hard to understand while it's slipping through your hands. Can you save me?" - Stiff Kitty
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Wow all 5 of your drawings are amazing.One advice from me is to work a little bit on orochimaru in his face structure.Good job on all the drawings of Edward, 4 hokage, and orochimaru. Also on the twilight cover and the first one.
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05-20-2008, 08:04 PM

I agree, they are all good but Orochimaru needs a bit of work. Other than that great Job!
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05-20-2008, 08:30 PM

They are all good; my favorite is Namikaze =)


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05-20-2008, 08:46 PM

These are all really great! But I think you should work on you coloring. The actually outline is great, though!
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05-20-2008, 10:36 PM

u draw so good, i really like the twilight cover cause im horrible at drawing hands!
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05-21-2008, 12:47 AM

wow...they are great...

i wish i could draw like tht...

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i especially like the twilight and edward eric
cuz i'm currently reading twilight and i effing love FMA


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05-21-2008, 01:18 AM

Those are pretty sweet, props.


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05-21-2008, 03:19 AM

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Wow all 5 of your drawings are amazing.One advice from me is to work a little bit on orochimaru in his face structure.Good job on all the drawings of Edward, 4 hokage, and orochimaru. Also on the twilight cover and the first one.
I agree...


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05-22-2008, 04:00 PM

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I agree, they are all good but Orochimaru needs a bit of work. Other than that great Job!
lol yea i hardly ever color my stuff so i'll try to do better in that department. As for orochimaru, i think were i went wrong is his head..wat do u think?


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