My story

lulu · (#1 (**permalink**))

Here is the first chapter of the story I'm writing. (I'll post the next chapters as soon as I type them) I hope you'll like it! ^____^

Please, forgive my spelling/grammar mistakes!

Translating is more difficult than I thought...

Please, tell me your opinion!!! If I see that you like it, then I'll post the next chapters too when I'm done with them! I promise more action!

VampireGirl1314 · (#2 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by lulu

Here is the first chapter of the story I'm writing. (I'll post the next chapters as soon as I type them) I hope you'll like it! ^____^

Please, forgive my spelling/grammar mistakes!

Translating is more difficult than I thought...

Please, tell me your opinion!!! If I see that you like it, then I'll post the next chapters too when I'm done with them! I promise more action!

I liked it but their was only three pages to read or foer i lost track but it was really good.>^_^<

lulu · (#3 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314

I liked it but their was only three pages to read or foer i lost track but it was really good.>^_^<

I know... My chapters are kinda small... I don't think that they'll be over 4 pages. I may post the next one tomorrow! I'll do my best to translate it.

You really liked it? Thanks!

harajukuXx · (#4 (**permalink**))

I really loved reading it it was interesting and fun can't wait to see what happens next lol

VampireGirl1314 · (#5 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by lulu

I know... My chapters are kinda small... I don't think that they'll be over 4 pages. I may post the next one tomorrow! I'll do my best to translate it.

You really liked it? Thanks!

Thats good to find out i love reading almost anything and even when it is boring i still want to read it but yours is awesome i wish i could figure out what to do next for my book all i have is about 16 pages written so far and i dont know about the name i just know that no one has used the name because it took me about five seconds to come up with it and i like the name i am making a email with the name.>^_^<maybe you should be the first to read it and tell me what you think.>^__^<

lulu · (#6 (**permalink**))

@ harajukuXx: Thanks! I'm really glad to see that other people like what I write! *tears of joy*

@ VampireGirl1314: I would be glad to read it!!!!

Sorry, but I don't have the next chapter ready to post yet... And my mother saw what I was doing and wants me to stop posting my story... TT____TT

VampireGirl1314 · (#7 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by lulu

@ harajukuXx: Thanks! I'm really glad to see that other people like what I write! *tears of joy*

@ VampireGirl1314: I would be glad to read it!!!!

Sorry, but I don't have the next chapter ready to post yet... And my mother saw what I was doing and wants me to stop posting my story... TT____TT

Thats okay i will buy it when it comes out in stores but could you do me a favor and tell me what you think of my book its a thread so everyone can read it i want to know if its good its my first time writing a book.>_<

lulu · (#8 (**permalink**))

I don't think that it will ever come out on stores... They won't accept a "novel" from a 14 or 15year-old girl... X___X

I'll search for that thread!! ^__^

Kiyuge · (#9 (**permalink**))

It was really good :3 Why doesnt your mum want you posting anymore? ;-;

lulu · (#10 (**permalink**))

Because she says that someone may steal my ideas and make money by selling a book that I actually wrote. I hate to admit it but she's kinda right...