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12-25-2008, 11:27 AM
@ AnimeBaby112 : I really love your poem. The rhythm is great, though it's so sad.
@ redsteel : nice poem! :] I think it's kind of funny in the short way it's written. No extra drama, which makes it only more tragic. @ Ningyou : I really love the end of your poem! That's important, because that's what decides most about how you feel of a poem. ;] You can be proud of it, great it got published! This is one of the things I like to write, which I tend to do a lot. Flawless It’s in the moments like this, When I don’t want to any more. I should so much, Could so much, Promise so much… But I want peace. Silence. Time stands still and nobody cares. My promises break, Time stands still. Everyone goes on. I want you to be with me. To breath with you flawless, And nothing more. Time stands still. Everyone goes on without us. And the silence… Loneliness swallows us. When the people continue, Without us. They forget us, And we are here together. Without each other. I look up to the sun, Where are you? I went through this too often, I want to stay here, With you nothing. Time stands still. Everyone goes on without us. In the silence… |
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12-29-2008, 06:53 PM
Pain in love
Is something all souls with love in their hearts Must endure. Days become longer When love is apart, The hours tear at their heart strings; Shredding them into pieces But love must endure. Stormy nights spent alone Has all eyes brimming over with tears, And the fear that you may not be among the living In the morning. But love must endure Even if death claims the other half. |
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12-31-2008, 01:31 AM
O amor é dor
Qualquer um que ache que o amor é indolor Não sabe que o preto é a única cor Amar é se escravizar Perder totalmente a sua liberdade Muitos se negam a aceitar Mas esta é a verdade Tolos buscam a felicidade Sem saber que o universo não tem piedade Fracos buscam um parceiro ou uma parceira São mais cegos do que uma toupeira É a verdade que ninguém quer aceitar Mas ela está por aí e você não pode escapar Amar é se desintegrar |
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12-31-2008, 03:54 AM
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12-31-2008, 12:56 PM
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JF family: Daughter: VampireGirl1314 if you wanna be in my family PM me ^^ I own Sakito from DLQ x |
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12-31-2008, 12:59 PM
Remember-Christina Rossetti
Remember me when I am gone away, Gone far away into the silent land; When you can no more hold me by the hand, Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay. Remember me when no more day by day. You tell me of our future that you plann'd: Only remember me; you understand It will be late to counsel then or pray. Yet if you should forget me for a while And afterwards remember, do not grieve: For if the darkness and corruption leave A vestige of the thoughts that once I had, Better by far you should forget and smile Than that you should remember and be sad. JF family: Daughter: VampireGirl1314 if you wanna be in my family PM me ^^ I own Sakito from DLQ x |
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12-31-2008, 04:51 PM
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01-04-2009, 10:09 PM
Something Special!!!
If you loved someone would you tell them? if they loved you would you take care of them? if they wanted to stay with you would they run away from home? I would but only to see you! I would tell you how much i loved you! I would email you everyday just to make sure your okay! But how can we trust this thing called love? Do we just let life go on the way you dont want it to go? I would never let a love like you get away not in my life time. I would sleep in the cold just to be with you. I would make sure you were happy. If i was making you sad would you tell? I think you would because you have a kind heart! You are the most special thing ive found in life! Thats why i will talk to you everyday and make sure you are okay! But am i special enough for you to do the same for me??? By:VampireGirl1314 I could never be happier. I found my missing piece and i know he wont leave me. song by simple plan. +{Member of the Crusnik Clan--Crusnik 04}+ +{Codename: Abel}+ I'm sorry for acting like this... |
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