Post a poem!!!

[VampireGirl1314]

Originally Posted by sakari09

Aw. I'm sorry Twin. T.T *hugs*

a hug for you,
for your pained heart.
it'll only be here for a little while
so don't fret.
I'll be with you
through this tough time.

thank you.^^

[VampireGirl1314]

I never ment for this to happen,
But somehow everything i have fought for is gone.
What have i done?
Is this where my life is supposed to go?
I don't know who you are,
but something tells me,
that i need to be close to you.
You have my every thought,
I have told you everything,
and somehow all this pain is fading away.
all my trouble's are going away,
and everything i have fought for,
is coming back to me,
even every memory.

[sakari09]

Please someone tell me
why is must always rain
when he leaves me?
it's never a refreshing rain,
just harsh and cold--
leaving me with emptness in
my heart
and warm tears on my cheeks.

[Raisthlin]

Poems ?

- I am Canadian.

'nuff said

[Teajay]

Here I Stand
..
Broken Hearted
..
Try to Poo
..
But Only Farted
..

[KikiBunny23]

She Hides in Her Room...
Where the Angels Sleep

Crystal Tears,
ever so quiet...
slide down rosy cheeks.

She hides in her room,
where the angels lay.

Ever so slightly,
she wipes the tears.
But all too soon,
fresh ones replace.

Not sure what to do,
or where to go,
she slits those slender wrists,
and watches the blood flow.

She lies in her room,
where the angels sleep,
quietly dying,
not sure what to do.

The ending turned out different than I wanted...I plan on writing a different version of it when I'm happier

[VampireGirl1314]

Originally Posted by sakari09

Please someone tell me
why is must always rain
when he leaves me?
it's never a refreshing rain,
just harsh and cold--
leaving me with emptness in
my heart
and warm tears on my cheeks.

you know you will see him again.^_^



I sleep in the dark,
I hear the noises,
I smell the smoke,
I cough from suffocation,
I do nothing to save myself,
Sleeping calmly in the darkness,
But why do i feel like someone is with me?
Who is holding my hand?
I must be dreaming,
Because people have told me,
that no one will ever love me.
I hear screaming,
I stay still,
Coughing from the smoke,
But why do i feel so happy,
To not be alone,
Because i can feel his hand on mine,
And maybe he is the one i need to find.
I just know this is the one,
I have been looking for my whole life,
He was in my every dream,
He helped me get through the pain and suffering.
He is mine i just know he is the one,
He is the one that wont let go of me.

[pumpum]

ok my first poem got banned - guess it wasnt serious enough = so heres my second attempt, now this is real poetry - hold this -

Fake people
Are people that are not real
They always try to deceive you
And make you think that they are the real deal
With fake people
You can never see the light
Because when you are staring into their eyes
It's always dark and never bright
Fake people are like mirrors
You can see right through them
They are always lying to you
But you already know it's a scam
Fake people are always trying
To be something that they are not
But when you get a good look at them
You realize that they don't look no where near as hot
Fake people think
That they gain a reputation
But in my eyes
They are an embarrassment to the entire nation
They are always trying to convince you
To believe who they say they are
But a fake person can't fool me
Because I'm way too smart
Fake people waste time
But they never pay attention to the time that they are wasting
Only because their minds are always racing
They are always trying to impress you
With things that you never notice
But you wouldn't be impressed
Even if you noticed
People don't like to be lied to
So I think it's better to tell the truth
And to let people see you for the real you
You have a chance
To be a leader of the pack
And I don't think that things
Can get any better than that
Fake people think
That they can lie to get what they want
But what they want
Doesn't accept false identity
All that they ask for
Is an ounce of simplicity
Fake people think that when people tell them the truth
That they are the enemy
But all they are trying to do
Is mold you into the person they know you can be
Because deep down inside
I know the real you is a star
And I think that it's time for the fake you
And the real you to depart
Trust me
You don't want to go down that road
Because people
Don't have to be rocket scientists to know
That a fake person is living in our society
Lucky for us real people
That we have a variety
Fake people think that they are being real
But there is no real way to be fake
Maybe that will teach them
To put some thought into the decisions that they make
I always try to be me
And nobody else
Because if I did
It would be very easy for you to tell
Sometimes fake people
Are hard to believe
And they never realize
What the real person within them can achieve
You should rise
From underneath all that clutter
Because there is only one you
And there will never be another
And so the lesson here
Has been discovered
To never become a fake
Or you will suffer

Dedicated to all those who need to dress up to gain an identity.

[VampireGirl1314]

Originally Posted by pumpum

ok my first poem got banned - guess it wasnt serious enough = so heres my second attempt, now this is real poetry - hold this -

that poem was nice
but the other one i did not like
that is why i asked for it be removed
i am sorry
i should have told you.

will you forgive me?

[VampireGirl1314]

Originally Posted by KikiBunny23

She Hides in Her Room...
Where the Angels Sleep

Crystal Tears,
ever so quiet...
slide down rosy cheeks.

She hides in her room,
where the angels lay.

Ever so slightly,
she wipes the tears.
But all too soon,
fresh ones replace.

Not sure what to do,
or where to go,
she slits those slender wrists,
and watches the blood flow.

She lies in her room,
where the angels sleep,
quietly dying,
not sure what to do.

The ending turned out different than I wanted...I plan on writing a different version of it when I'm happier

aw sister this poem is lovely.^_^