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Poems I've written - 07-25-2008, 10:44 PM

Here are a few poems that I've written. All of them are from my own mind and are not a copy of anyone else's work.

Anime Poems
Broken Heart
Random Life Poems

Please leave your comments! Thank you!!
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07-25-2008, 11:05 PM

Most of them Are really good.

you should try righting poetry that doesn't have a rhyming scheme. Maybe focus more on syllable count
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07-25-2008, 11:51 PM

Ah... I'm sorry, I didn't know. ^^; From now on I'll post my poems over there... Thank you.
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Post Full moon... - 07-26-2008, 07:11 PM

Hello everybody,
this is one of the poems that i'v written long ago..
enjoy...


when the moon appeard
the stars glowed
the weather changed

The moon sparkeld in the space
as the mist started to spread along

The dead spirits started to move
and destroy places in earth

It was a full moon
The time have come for the earth to be
the most feared planet in the universe

But the moon didnt allow this
a sound came out of the moon
it was th fearest sound in the world
that stopped spirits from spreading along

that was a fear pain
but the moon started to glow again
and smiled to the big universe...

Samauf


The Time Have Come For The Earth To Be The Most Feared Planet In The Universe...
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08-05-2008, 08:39 PM

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Inspiration

Two new poems for you guys. I hope you enjoy... also, please post comments on the bottom or press "I Like It!" If you do. Thank you for reading~


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08-05-2008, 08:55 PM

Hm....

Twinkle twinkle, little bird.
How I've wondered what you heard.
Up atop my head, you're high,
Like a stoner who now skydives.
Twinkle, twinkle... Twinkle, twinkle..

A bit silly, I suppose.


The color of the sala flower reveals the truth that is... To flourish is to fall. The proud do not endure.

Heaven or Hell, Let's Rock!

Like a passing dream on a night in Spring. The mighty fall at last, to be no more than dust before the wind.
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08-19-2008, 06:28 PM

Running With Scissors

I’m running with scissors
Fighting against the Lie of Life
Losing myself along a ribbon road
Filled in darkness.
I’m running with scissors
Across the Bridge of Deceit
Flooded in the River of Time.
I’m running with scissors
Nearing the end of the ribbon of life
Wrapped in shrouds upon shrouds
Of lies and unspoken Truths.
I’m running with scissors
Through my Life’s ribbon
Ripping it into shreds
With my dull, tear-rusted blades.

* I enjoyed writing this one. *


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Waning Night - 08-20-2008, 04:11 AM

okay here's something of the top of my head so tell me how horrid it sounds :P

So here we lay,
Entwined in a passion that has long since gone astray.
We both know that the night is waning,
That our love is fleeing.
But please baby just stay for a bit more.
Fake that love we once swore.
Just stay here whispering sweet nothings.
Even though they mean anything but something.
Because baby we both know this must come to and end to soon,
And across the floor our clothes are strewn.
So please just stay.
And we'll try to keep the sun at bay.
We both know that night is waning,
That our love is fleeing.


"If I could follow my heart again it would be yours
with every breath I would find a way to love you more"
~With You by Josh Groban


"With you I have everything I have ever wanted. Simple and true. With loving eyes so beautiful." ~ With You by Josh Groban
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08-20-2008, 01:56 PM

That was great. I enjoyed it.


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