Post a poem!!!

[VampireGirl1314]

Riha: that was the most awesome dark poem i have read so far.xD

[Riha]

Oh my God, thanks


I.... have.... more... >.>;;;



Do you want?

[VampireGirl1314]

Originally Posted by Riha

Oh my God, thanks


I.... have.... more... >.>;;;



Do you want?

yes yes i do.xD

[Riha]

Okay >.>;;; Just like the last one, they're all old


This first one isn't dark :O


Emo Love (cause I could never think of a better title, OTL)


The silent rain outside,
Echoes a sorrowful mood,

Gray splashed sky,
On the Heavens canvas,

Crystal waves crashing,
Onto foamy shores,

The water inching up to you,
A sensation into your pores,

Hand in hand, you’re by my side,
A loyal partner to see me through,

Shadowed wolves with diamond eyes,
Howl at the painted golden moon,

The sound of hooves bearing,
Over the velvet Earth,

Celestial beasts with manes of silk,
Enchant us with all of Heavens worth,

The harmonic ocean tempo,
The feel of one flying,

Doesn’t come near the sensation I get,
When your arms connect over me,

A glistening emerald staircase,
An opal-shinned beacon,

The feel of you through my hair,
Like a lullaby I’m swayed to sleep,

Dance among the stars,
Every shinning one,

The purity of your heart,
Shines greater than the sun,

Listen to the ocean,
Dolphins silently frolicking,

The shore fossilized with our imprints,
Embedded with it our hearts too,

For you see my dear what I’m trying to say,
Is simply that I do love you.



Dark poem!


Crimson Snow

Hush now darling, hurry to sleep,
There’s someone you’ve been wanting to meet,
Drift off now, to your crimson dreams,
Hug your little teddy, torn at its seams,

Wake wake now, Its finally begun,
Trapped in your dreams, there’s nowhere to run,
Crimson snow falling gentley overhead,
We all know that soon you’ll be dead,

Wander endlessly, there’s nowhere to go,
From the gray sky falls crimson snow,
Here there’s no such thing as a garden of roses,
Grab your gun and make suicidal poses,

Everything you touch turns to ash,
Snow building up on the eye of your lash,
Tormented by nightmares, haunted by life,
You know the only way out is the knife,

Trembling and cold, you try to awake,
To go back and live a life so fake,
A deceiving smile, secrets you keep,
The wounds in your heart are just too deep,

Please don’t struggle, Please don’t fight,
I promise you my dear it’ll be alright,
There we go, make bigger gashes,
Snow falling on all of your lashes,

Bleed crimson like the tainted snow,
Heaven isn’t where good girls go,
It’s all a lie, none of it’s true,
Liefe was a lie but you already knew,

Now that you’re dying you feel love,
Your bed drenched in crimson blood,
Hold on to teddy, hold him tight,
I told you everything would be alright,

Your dreams start fading as the blood flows,
When your life is hell this is how the end goes,
But still you smile, Can you tell me why?
When now you should b saying your final goodbye,

Ohh it’s too late, your heart has stopped,
And from your hand the knife has dropped,
Now teddy’s alone, poor little bear,
He was the only one that truly did care…


One more...


Death by Degrees

Silence,
Silence reflecting off the lonely lake,
Innocent soul drowned by what is not,
Pure heart chipping away at its break,

Love,
Love struck boy falling into the trap,
Of hate-fueled jealousy,
The demonic princesses wrath,

Agony,
Agony drenched darkness blinding as light,
Curious eyes blurring,
What’s to be wrong is right,

Melody,
Melody of sadness slowly churning,
Ears bleed at its vile rhythm,
Both Heaven and Hell lay burning,

Revenge,
Revenge sought for bitter satisfaction,
Its touch like frozen needles,
Sewing up the ending reaction,

Pain,
Pain drugging so you are high,
Memory being erased away,
What won’t you try?

Death,
Death draining feeble life from your veins,
Clock ticking to your demise,
Blood flowing as it rains.

[VampireGirl1314]

nice poems.xD



you never thought of me this way before
you never really called me *mi amor*
when your gone there is a fire burning in me
getting stronger each day without you here
i keep wondering when you will finally be here
i see you every other day
but i miss you when your away
right now i feel so great
i saw you the other night
it was your birthday
i didnt have a present
so i gave you something even more special
something that i didnt want to give you for three years
but you kept asking and begging i was sad and wanting
and now here i lay thinking back on that wonderful day
knowing that now we are even closer together then we ever have
we will have this bond for the rest of our life
if anything bad ever happened to you i would literally cry
blood would flood from my eyes
pain deep down inside
i swear that night was the best night of my life.

[Riha]

What's the title of that poem? :O

[VampireGirl1314]

Originally Posted by Riha

What's the title of that poem? :O

lolz i didnt make one i just wrote the poem.>.<


i guess my love for you?

[Riha]

That works as a title

[VampireGirl1314]

Originally Posted by Riha

That works as a title

yeps.xD
and i better go to bed.>.<

[sakari09]

I've always liked this siloquoy from Macbeth. I'm in the process of writing a poem based off it.

“She should have died hereafter; there would have been a time for such a word. Tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow creeps in this petty pace from day to day, to the last syllable of recorded time; and all our yesterdays have lighted fools the way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle! Life’s but a walking shadow, a poor player that struts and frets his hour upon the stage and then is heard no more. It is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury signifying nothing.”--Macbeth, Macbeth (act V, scene V)