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05-28-2009, 02:02 PM
I had a dream. I had a dream once, that I could fly. My feet levitated off the ground. I swear it was so surreal. My feet? Off the ground? I’ve never been on a plane. The first thing I remember doing in flying up to the sky and touching a cloud. Very fluffy and cool. If I could do this than the world is my oyster. I flew around, and saw the astonished looks on peoples faces. So overjoyed or surprised. I flew around the world. I went to Africa and rode an elephant, I went to France and ate cheese. I helped Cambodians doing field work.. Everyone was happy, they laughed they smiled. There was no war, No pain, No conflict, just peace. And I flew and flew and flew. But in this peace and happiness I realized it was too good to be true. I woke up. In this world, full of destruction and chaos, I laid in my bed, waiting to go back asleep. To escape once more 
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05-29-2009, 07:48 AM
the heavens are opening up to me
i fall to my feet blood flooding out my mouth you take the knife out i cover my mouth then one last time i finally scream fall down and hit the floor you kiss me goodbye and you will see me no more. you killed my life you killed my spirit you killed my time and you proved it now its time for me to do it i will give you time i will lift your spirit i wont kill your life and this is how I'll prove it. you have been waiting for me but i have been waiting for you i just haven't had time to see you you have been away so this is all i can say you and me are just the same the passion we share is exciting this energy you give me might just kill me but its so sweet that i just cant stay away.  I could never be happier. I found my missing piece and i know he wont leave me. song by simple plan. +{Member of the Crusnik Clan--Crusnik 04}+ +{Codename: Abel}+ I'm sorry for acting like this...
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05-29-2009, 12:19 PM
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I could never be happier. I found my missing piece and i know he wont leave me. song by simple plan. +{Member of the Crusnik Clan--Crusnik 04}+ +{Codename: Abel}+ I'm sorry for acting like this...
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05-31-2009, 09:47 PM
The Chat Poem
Volume 1 If you build your heaven, You find your hell If you destroy your hell, You keep on living well But only time will tell, never go to the wishing well Your life would be at stake, to make such a mistake as that So take your time, to make a dime And into your heart, will I shoot my dart Back to the place, So we can be us We must stay in the race, You have my trust And 'till death's door, May I be yours And with my all honesty, I tell you thee, We---will be. Free to the end to fight and defend, Fly away and feel okay. Contributers VampireGirl1314 KikiBunny23 Yuusuke Darksyndrem
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05-31-2009, 10:28 PM
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ome of the lines seemed forced, but other then that it's good. 4/5 for the flow of the poem, 4/5 for the message, and 4/5 for the image that the poem sets in my mind i wont say who scored this because its a secret.xD I could never be happier. I found my missing piece and i know he wont leave me. song by simple plan. +{Member of the Crusnik Clan--Crusnik 04}+ +{Codename: Abel}+ I'm sorry for acting like this...
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06-01-2009, 04:01 AM
LOL
you really own this thread dont you Well ok Ill just post a quick improvised one Just 4 fun Lost My shining star has fade`t away, I`m lost, cant find my way, to the angels I pray Would i find her anyway, Would my pain go away? Fuck it ... I never believed in angels anyway... Gerland
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06-01-2009, 04:02 AM
Ah and sorry 4 the inappropriate word I used.
but Hey this is Art, they are no rules no recipes
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06-01-2009, 05:07 AM
Mind if I post a song instead? Pretty much like a poem but with a chorus.
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