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07-31-2009, 10:02 AM
I cant see your love
I can see your life I cant see your mind I can see your time I love your life I wont know your time I cant make up your mind And i wont be the one left at the scene of the crime.  I could never be happier. I found my missing piece and i know he wont leave me. song by simple plan. +{Member of the Crusnik Clan--Crusnik 04}+ +{Codename: Abel}+ I'm sorry for acting like this... 
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08-07-2009, 06:34 PM
@vg1314: nice...i'd like to add...if u don't mind. ^.^
I can't see when you're leaving I can't feel you anymore I can't go on pretending I can't be me without you I can't make up your mind, But I'll never forget you Once upon a time.... 
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08-09-2009, 10:21 AM
Tiger! Tiger! Burning bright
In the forests of the night, What immortal hand or eye Could frame thy fearful symmetry? In what distant deeps or skies Burnt the fire of thine eyes? On what wings dare he aspire? What the hand dare seize the fire? And what shoulder, and what are, Could twist the sinews of thy heart? And when thy heart began to beat, What dread hand? and what dread feet? What the hammer? what the chain? In what furnace was thy brain? What the anvil? what dread grasp? Dare it's deadly terrors clasp? When the stars threw down their spears, And watered heaven with their tears, He He smile His work to see? Did He who made the Lamb, make thee? Tiger! Tiger! Burning bright In the forests of the night, What immortal hand or eye, Dare frame thy fearful symmetry? -William Blake ♥ 8/21/09 ♥
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08-13-2009, 07:50 AM
something happened to us today....something bad
why do gangsters have to go for the unknown and not for the known why do gangsters have to pretend that they are scary when they look like a clown what did i do to deserve to be hurt so badly i suffer from seeing this happen to someone i love I'm glad they left us alone the first time while i was by your side right now i am scared and i want to begin to cry you are alone with your friend right now walking back home in the streets of this dark night broken street lights flickering off and on those gangsters still roaming around probably about to kill you i want to cry just by thinking of what might be happening to you now i want to know your okay and your safe at home a heart attack is one thing but to be dead for good is the bad i know i was brave while the gangsters held a knife to me i know i cried when they left knowing something might have happened to you i am sorry i freaked i am sorry i broke i shouldn't have thought a thing i shouldn't have ever froze i cried on your shoulder as you tried to calm me down i was shaking with fear that i was so close to losing you your the best thing that has ever happened to me i love you and i never want anything bad like that to happen again. I could never be happier. I found my missing piece and i know he wont leave me. song by simple plan. +{Member of the Crusnik Clan--Crusnik 04}+ +{Codename: Abel}+ I'm sorry for acting like this...
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08-13-2009, 08:44 AM
Snow so white falls to the ground
Night so quiet makes no sound Hope so light flows through the air Fire so bright cradles with care Dreamers so lost look towards the sky Stars so bright, unreachable, so high Lovers so cold huddle in eachothers' hold Stories so old, long forgotten, are told Winters so long go on forever Winters so wonderful we will always remember
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08-20-2009, 06:02 AM
everyone's writing is so good, i am jealous!
vampire and aether, i really liked yours...the themes were intriguing! hmm, well i guess i'll give this a shot... this poem's one of my first that i wrote for one of my english classes over the summer two years ago that we had to channel...well, i guess you could call it "shakespeare-esque" love into, only mixing it with edgar allen poe-like horror, if that makes sense...xD i call it "not quite jack and sally" : --- Gasping, Struggling - can't get enough air... Despite your state of fascism, all I can do is stare. Screaming, Fighting - heartbeat declining... Your hands around my wrists, in no way inviting. Declaring, Fading - it's my thoughts you are raping... To me, you are no peace in the making. the lights are dimmed, the music plays softly It's all you can do to hold yourself back my mind begs silently for a retreat But my body begs violently for a release... your face, full of gore - My eyes, echo war - Sworn enemies, we should be, But jaded lovers, we do seem.
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A few of mine (not very good) -
08-25-2009, 03:34 AM
Horizons
Stepped out of infinity, plus one more beautiful step in finite self. The liquid shade of a pulse, too whole to mix with my limited self. Out of something comes, the void of nothingness inside its heart. A borrowed skin upon me, I am 30 times the speed of night. A nomad to the karmic light, I find the empty house at the end of my mind. untitled chances Chances missed on a warm summer evening, calls gone unanswered in the night, sitting waiting on nothing, still we are all alone. Chances never come again, try and try as we might, we can never change what has already passed, and at the end of times we are alone. To change our fates we must wait, interminably wait for what may never come, but hope eternal drives us on, to try and not be so alone. The Green Room Green grass, green walls, brown skies, brown borders, sit a while and take it in, surrounded by hope, melancholy. Try to see what is beyond, hide what lies beneath pain comes to all men and all men dream. What can it be if not I, angels won't worship me. As we lie in fields of green, green grass, green walls, all melt under scrutiny. There is nothing there, but what we hide inside, crawling up like a spider. Brown skies, brown borders, swallow inside what we never were. What we never are
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08-26-2009, 09:59 PM
Eh why not.Here you go.
 Holding hands and hearts go hand and hand, What part of I love you don't you understand. The list of mistakes I made go on for eternity, But that wouldn't matter if you could only see how much I need you baby. Why can't you see. I only need you baby. Yeah so what if my wants seem selfish, Because too hold your hand is my only wish. This world is an empty abyss without you, Lover cause you'll always be the left to my right shoe. Why can't you see, I only want you baby. So I'll pray that I can sleep without you tonight, So maybe I'll dream of being asleep in your arms.  Um.......... 
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09-03-2009, 09:11 AM
The Run Away its time to have a nightmare this is where i scream Oh my god its jack is he coming after me? Ouch! a black cat bit me what is going on? is this my week of bad luck i need to run away the run away somewhere to breath someplace to feel free the run away a place where i will get rid of my nightmares and only have a million dreams Oh my god its jack why do i have red hair this is so unfair i am bleeding i am screaming i am needing to find a place to hide the run away is a place where i need to be the run away the only way i can be free the run away dont tell me any other stories Because i dont have time dont tell me this is a crime the run away this isnt a notebook i dont need to hear your stories dont tell me that im over thinking when i know your lying to me the run away please just let me scream i know i have been over thinking every time i see you i cant help it i cant get over this jealousy the run away no one will delete my pictures no one will tell me what to think the run away that is me the run away dont tell me your stories because i dont have the time dont tell me what to think i know what i have seen i know what i have heard and i cant help but scream all the time i know what my heart has told you and i will show you one more time the run away.... the run away is me!!! so say good bye i wont ask you one more time because i only hear your lies and i am the run away so say good bye. I could never be happier. I found my missing piece and i know he wont leave me. song by simple plan. +{Member of the Crusnik Clan--Crusnik 04}+ +{Codename: Abel}+ I'm sorry for acting like this...
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09-03-2009, 09:43 AM
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sweet! nice add on twin.^^ i so need to talk to you about something. I could never be happier. I found my missing piece and i know he wont leave me. song by simple plan. +{Member of the Crusnik Clan--Crusnik 04}+ +{Codename: Abel}+ I'm sorry for acting like this...
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