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04-09-2007, 01:09 PM

"An evasion of detiny, Suzette, an evasion of destiny...", I mutter while staring aimlessly into the sunrise, my eyes back to their original color of the sky. At that moment, I feel an inexplicable bond with Suzette, like we'd known each other before... No, even beyond that...

I look at Suzette's face - her eyes are spilling with an undefined loneliness, slowly reflecting the sun's morning light as it rises, the sky reflecting it's spectrum of orange as well. Is she feeling the same way as I am? A gentle breeze picks up, sweeping her long glowing brown hair around her, engulfing her in a veil of twilight purity, sharp in contrast to the ruffian of a woman whom I had fought earlier on.

Suzette then turns her head towards me, as if in slow motion. Her passionate eyes losing their vivid harshness and taking on a soft tenderness.

Tears are practically flowing out of my eyes and streaming down my face in an endless current of sanctuary. Why is she so similar to me..? Why is this feeling so different from what I'd felt when I saw Musashi? Why is everything happening so fast? Why does her flesh and blood breathe in my soul? Why can't my obstinate and vengeful self force these weaknesses out of me? Why...

I have a million questions, but our heads involuntarily close in on each other...

I can't... I defiantly start to raise my boot, unlatching a hidden dagger inside it. I have to stop this... before it is too late...

**You did, it was kinda tough though... I had to listen to BoA's "Everlasting" and "Peace" two times each to gain inspiration, haha... We're joining in the romantic theme!!!! Now it's your turn! XD

P.S. You can write for me too, SS, if I ever stop posting within three days ^_^ **


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04-09-2007, 10:42 PM

**haha I love it!! omg I'mmsoo mad. My computer's broken so I can't get online, so CoolNard, I'll leave u a PM and I hope you can write for me ok?? *huggles* you're the best! *



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04-10-2007, 11:04 PM

****Thanx for letting me make a second character Ichirin-kun. I am kind of stumped with Tatsu and Nozomi. I know they are going to get caught and arrested by the Dragon Army. I'm not going to travel to the sister city of Thâk Sûl for allies, you and Myzura can do that if you wish. But make sure you get Sand Warriors from Bachuu. (Besides that I don't think we'll get any other allies. The sailors of Disan wouldn't help us, and the people of Thâk Sûl, are all old and unable to battle.)****

Okay! new character time!

Name: Kazuhide, (Kazu for short)
Age: 20yrs.
Height: 5'8''
Weight: about 140. lean, very quick
Weapon: A Black Naginata named Jet with a Golden Dragon pattern
Further Details: Kazuhide is a young man, a spy in the Dragon City. He joined the Dragon Army at the age of 15. (It was the first year of Shakura's rule) He is very strong, and knows alot of dragon techniques. He even learned the sacred art to breath fire like a dragon can. He knows Swiftant, but they are rivals. Kazuhide was sent to the Dragon Army as a spy for the Elves. He has completed his mission, and traveled to the Thâk Sûl forest with Thrandos, but he left his side during the battle. He observed the fight. Not much else can be said at the moment. Kazuhide is mysterious, and no one knows anything about him. He wears a tight black stealth suit. Easy to move in. He wears a pair of leather knee boots, and black gloves. His hair is dark brown, and is tied in a ponytail. His eyes are green, but the pupils are red. He wears a holster on his left leg, that holds a communication device, to keep in contact with the Elves, and a whistle, to call his Black Dragon guardian, Fayuro.
Team: N/A
City: Thâk Sûl Forest

I crouched amongst the overgrowth. Hidden well from sight, and disguised in the dark. Swift was good, but not even he could defeat a Dragon General, few can... I watched as he was carried away, back to the lair, back to Shakura, where he would be killed. I laughed to myself. I couldn't believe a loyal dog like Swift would betray her Holiness. When Thrandos removed him, his signature accessory, his sakkat, lie there unattended. When all was silent I moved from my hiding spot, and claimed Swift's item. "This would be a good prize for the Queen, but lucky for him, my mission has ended, and I am no longer needed to be a pawn of the Dragons." A device in my pocket starts to beep. I remove it and it is a call from my master. An old elf. "Yes master." I speak in the device. "Kazuhide." A frail voice replies. "Our elites have just confirmed that Swiftant has been captured. Is this correct?"

I smile to myself. So the old man already knows, the Elites are better then I thought. "Yes master, Swiftant has returned to the Dragon Lair, to be executed, I believe." There was silence for a moment. "Kazuhide...you are to return to the Dragon Empire, and retrieve Swiftant, and any other allies you can gather. We are in need of his services." I didn't like what my master was saying. "Bring us Swiftant and you can finally return home, just like you have wanted after all these years." "Yes sir, I'll go get him now." The call ends, and I return the device to its holster. Then I remove the whistle, and signal for Fayuro to come and get me. Swiftant....I whisper into the air, I guess I'll return your sakkat to you. But only if you join me, and come to the Elven Stronghold deep, deep underground.

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04-11-2007, 01:38 AM

Well the highest rank is the Queen, The Dragon Queen Shakura. She is the ruler of the Dragon Empire. and her bodyguards, are an elite group of generals. Which we have been fighting. One is already dead, the IceDragon(blue)Xephon. There is a Dragon for each colour of the rainbow, + black, brown, and gold. Shakura is the SilverDragon. and you have the green one, Emerald I think you call it.
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04-11-2007, 10:12 AM

**Hey... Swift only lost because he got distracted!! Kinda like Shinn beating Kira at one point, really **


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04-11-2007, 11:31 PM

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Well the highest rank is the Queen, The Dragon Queen Shakura. She is the ruler of the Dragon Empire. and her bodyguards, are an elite group of generals. Which we have been fighting. One is already dead, the IceDragon(blue)Xephon. There is a Dragon for each colour of the rainbow, + black, brown, and gold. Shakura is the SilverDragon. and you have the green one, Emerald I think you call it.
I'm Talking about the highest rank in an army.

P.S. Did you even read any of my previous post?


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04-12-2007, 06:41 AM

**There is a difference between the dragon army and the freedom fighters, hara-kun both work for shakura but she has a different purpose for each of them **


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04-12-2007, 11:42 AM

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I'm Talking about the highest rank in an army.

P.S. Did you even read any of my previous post?
I do not know nor want to know about the army, I was talking about this thread Hara-kun. Yeah, I've read you posts before..... but anywayz did you read any of our posts?

Alright, as not to derail this beautiful thread, I will be editing this post with one of my characters.

TATSU

The morning sun shined in through an opening in the curtain. Nozomi was still holding me tightly, her eyes closed shut. I turned my head her gaze at her, and witness the sight of her so near. I couldn't tell if she was more beautiful in her sleep then she was when she was awake. Her hair was as warm as ever, and she smelled of Gana's feathers. We both could use a bath. Gently, I removed her from me, and finally got up. I shuffled to the window and looked out. The sun was almost at the highest point. How long had I slept?! It was almost noon. "Nozomi wake up! We got go to the castle." I shook her but she still didn't stir. "Come on, it's time to go." She flipped over and mumbled: " I don't want to eat that, give me something better." Sigh she was definitely dreaming. No use wasting more time. I'll go see the King alone.

***I'll write more later go to go.***

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04-12-2007, 10:19 PM

***Ok, so, now that I have to keep track of yet another character....I shall continue on where we left off.....which was....crap, I have to check....hold on....***


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04-12-2007, 11:15 PM

Myzura

Ichirin held my hand tightly as we ventured through the Canyon. The canyon walls shot high into the sky like skyscrapers, covered in rocky black shadows. The dry air followed us like stalkers of the night searching for prey. It was an uneasy feeling filling the pit of my stomache as I clenched Ichirin's hand harder. I knew he felt my uneasiness, yet I dare not show it. I felt the cool air on my back with the setting of the desert sun and a chill was set up my spine. We weren't alone. I looked around. The shadows rose, covering the wall like a thin blanket, entrapping the canyon in total darkness.

"Ichi...I think something is...following us..." I said, somewhat frightened, though i did not show it.

"I think you are right..." he said, strongly. He seemed so aware. I would've started thinking about all the things i love about him, but, at that moment, rocks began to fall from above us. We looked up and saw a large dark shadow with red eyes staring hungrily down at us

***you can write now Ichirin***


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