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04-18-2007, 01:35 PM
Our moist lips are merely an angel's feather away from each other. Her flowery fragrance rendering me helpless. Tears of sorrow reluctantly swarm up in my eyes, blurring my vision. Tormentingly torn between my purgatory of emotions, the notion of hurting Suzette traumatizes me. Realization finally hits me: she-
*!!!* Suzette's eyes widen in appalling shock whilst she stumbles backwards, clutching her left thigh in pain. Blood spills everywhere. I look down in horror, then it dawns on me. In my subconsciousness, I had let my daggerboot swing down loosely, unleashing its wrath onto Suzette in the process! Petrified, I fall to my knees and stare at Suzette in horror, at an apparent loss for what to do while the sensation of the whole world tumbling to pieces overwhelms me. It feels like the same blade that injured Suzette is stabbing continuously at my heart, pinning me onto the ground. "No, Su, I-", I start but find myself throwing up blood as well. Suzette had forseen the attack. A sword is pierced through my lower torso. I touch the wound - blood. Glancing up at Suzette, I see her hobbling towards me, leaning against the wall for support. Her eyes reverting back to their cruel and unpleasant state, her facial expression void of any love and warmth, but fused only with utmost disappointment and disbelief. Her hair hangs forlornly over her shoulder as she continues staggering darkly, to finish me off. Pushing my arms onto the dirt, I stand up, barely collapsing back onto my knees, my arms hanging limply by my sides. My eyes urge her to search every inch of my body for the truth. "I.. love... you... Su...", blood streams down from the side of my mouth when I speak. The strain I'm putting on myself causes me to pass out. The cave walls sing of melancholy, their voices echoing despair. **Argh.... Freaking writer's block!!! X_X** There's no such thing as happy endings, for when you find true love, happiness is everlasting.
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04-18-2007, 02:25 PM
***Nard-kun, Swiftant is still in the prison correct?***
TATSU The grass was light under my aching feet. The soil squished under the force of our heavy boots. A wind was started to pick up, and the sky grew darker with every step of the troops. Do even the Heavens damn us now? As my thoughts ended, the clouds unleashed all their fury against us, and an rainstorm poured down on our heads. Quickly, I was soaked...It seemed as if it was already the middle of the night, and it was only but noon. I pulled up my hood, to protect my eye from the falling water. Nozomi looked very annoyed, yet also sad. Was she thinking the same things I was? Did she think she was going to lose me? If we die, we'll die together. I'll hold her in my arms to the very end, I'll take all the pain from the dragons, she won't get hurt at all. My body will be a shield. I unsheathed Sora, as the first wave of dragons quickened its pace towards us. There were over 100 dragons advancing from the skies. They were gray in colour. None of them were anyone special. Just pawns of Shakura. If Nozomi and I fight defensively, we could take them all out. If Akuma comes out we might win, but in that form I cannot control her....yet... The Dragons were surprisingly small, they all landed hard on the ground, mud spat into the air. One of them stepped forward, "surrender humans, there is no hope for you here. Come with us, as our prisoners, and we will spare that puny capital." I hung my head, and put on a smile. "Puny? hahaha, nothing is more puny then you dragon, you pale in comparison to any general you fool." The dragon got annoyed faster then I thought he would. I found it hilarious. *** I got to go,write more some other time, Nard-kun, Kazuhide has your sakkat.*** |
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04-20-2007, 01:12 AM
It just shows you haven't been reading our posts, harajuku_pimp-kun
We have been reading urs, and it doesnt clash with any of our current writing. We added them to make the story more exciting XD And the storyplot is much better that way Since when? since the queen told him the truth, causing him to betray her There's no such thing as happy endings, for when you find true love, happiness is everlasting.
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