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01-27-2007, 05:42 AM
Little ones cry
little ones are here alone we just leave them to go to be to try we all will die for our wold tears us apart i am alone with no one to hold to grasp out into the air the thinning cold will soon hold what is left of me a lie here a lie there does it really matter with nothing to loose i will ooze out all of my pain we are suffering little by little hoping i will feel better but my pain isnt going down the drain instead it covers up all my lust for a new life of laughter and trust to be alone or to be shone out to this little meek world children cry and i try to strain to hear your words of wisdom for they are true and you will always be there i am the tears that fall, you are the blood on my skin, we are mingled forever again, here we stand, hand in hand, but ill let go when my time has come, time for u to fly alone 
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01-27-2007, 05:48 AM
Life isnt worth living without love
you took me away my love every day i put all my trust into something that wasnt really us i wanted to be a big family but then i saw you with that other thing the one you loved breaking my heart that is what tore us apart from living life to the fullest now i am sinking like i have no more life plumming down wards towands something with more lust but i still have something that you cn never have a life without living for i have gone to another place where i am here one moment and gone the next with a noose aroung my neck i get ready to fall when you came into the room with a look that said it all i am gone now you crying at my bloody feet time has no meaning since i am not here at all i am the tears that fall, you are the blood on my skin, we are mingled forever again, here we stand, hand in hand, but ill let go when my time has come, time for u to fly alone
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01-29-2007, 11:06 PM
omg! wow, I really really really like those! they are incredibly great, and i can totally feel what you were writting...I give you a thumbs up for both! Please, feel free to post more!
but here is a happy one from me... Perfect The smile that stops me Dead in my tracks The kiss that revives me That brings me back The embrace that comforts me The days that I cry The arms that find me When I’m lost in his eyes The words that speak to me The thoughts so kind The touch that gives me A new state of mind The skin that warms me Makes me love-sick The breath that mingles That tells me he’s perfect that has to be one of my favorites....tell me what you think...  If love is stupid, then I stupid you!  An Apple A Day Keeps Anyone Away If You Throw It Hard Enough...
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01-29-2007, 11:37 PM
I just thought I'd take my sig and make it into what it originally was supposed to be...
There is an endless rain of negativity. Streams of hatred run through our veins as we're drenched in regret. Teetering on the edge of despair, we fall back into the security of madness, leaving no space for the clouds to part and the rays of happiness to sink in. Death is just a coward's way out. And so, we flutter into the relams of consciousness. Our nightmares are plagued with demons jealous of the life we possess, and will claim it using any method possible. But, when we awake, the nightmares seem more like dreams, as everyone around is just a soulless entity, in a torn down city where people cling to the rubble of a happy life which was ripped apart years before our own existence. The debris of success lay scattered, with all wanting and few attaining. They're after you - just another rival. Don't put up a fight, they'll eat you alive. Don't fall, nobody will catch you. Note that all poems are different. Mine has 2 stanzas and no rhyme, only thought provoking materials hopefully. "Mossad knows what my Aunt Judy eats for breakfast."
Jack West Jr.
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01-30-2007, 12:21 AM
Maku.....That was amazing! I really really like that one, too! Thats so full of thought. I really like it. I love reading poems that make me think or feel....that one definatly made me feel. You should know that that is a real compliment. Like when I wrote my story Stars and it made people cry, I felt really great knowing that my work had really touched someone. So, I figured I'd let you know that I felt really touched from what you wrote.....you and Yuri most definately have to keep posting in here...
As for your lovely compliments, Rikku777, I'm very glad you like our work...It really means alot that people read and appriciate it! and since I'm bored, I think I will finally post Hate's Immortal Hate's Immortal I am the immortal I cannot die I'll walk this earth forever I'll do nothing but cry I've made people fall I've watched people break I've seen horrible disasters I've felt the earth shake Heaven's gates won't open Hell won't let me in I want to cheat my life Though it is a sin All humans must die Their bodies left emty Like a huge scar Leaving only a memory I've been to wars Darkness takes the sky And upon the ground I see people die I want go away Die just like them I want to be a memory My soul a precious gem I dislike this world My life's not worth living It's all about hate Peace no one is giving I've seen it all More bad than good Stop all the hate This world should I am the immortal And I want to die Because this world is full of hate I do nothing but cry **This poem inspired by the graphic novel Immortal Rain** If love is stupid, then I stupid you! An Apple A Day Keeps Anyone Away If You Throw It Hard Enough...
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