The poems I said I would post... - Page 5

musashi · (#41 (**permalink**))

Thank you, I am glad you like them! You should post some of your's!

Rikku777 · (#42 (**permalink**))

*dies* Ah, Mu mu.....*dreaming of guys* Oops, reality, seriously, great poem!

musashi · (#43 (**permalink**))

lol....I don't care...say what you want! lol

Kira_2009 · (#44 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by musashi

Another...

Falling Rain

Let the rain fall down
As we lie upon the ground
Let it clens our skin
Washing away our sin

We don't want to hear
The birds singing near
Let our lips taste
Kissing in beautiful haste

And may the misty air
Chill our bodies bare
Us moving as one
The rain still not done

Drops of cold wet
You can dry them, I'll let
And your sweet innocent kisses
I want them like riches

Our breathing's a hex
Our minds engaging in sex
Our bodies become whole
Giving life to our dead soul

And with one final kiss
All the time we've missed
A silence in the town
Please let the rain fall down

Oh, sooooo lustful....lol....tell me what you think...I like reveiws!

Wow I loved it...man ur such a good writer

musashi · (#45 (**permalink**))

I'm bored so I am posting another poem.....

Dare I Make A Wish

Dare I make a wish, save you from my spell
Give you but a kiss, long as you don't tell

Dare I close my eyes, to see you no more
Only just to cry, watch the open door

Dare I make a sound, to break the silence
To hear you not round, my tears become hence

Dare I reach for you, try to feel your touch
To feel the wind blew, following you such

Dare I be the wind, And follow you more
Though I may be sinned, I run out the door

Here I reach for you, now to to feel your touch
Am no longer blue, I have missed you much

Dare I see you now, give me but a kiss
Kiss you back I shall, Dare I make a wish

Kira_2009 · (#46 (**permalink**))

I love that one too

Hisuwashi · (#47 (**permalink**))

So do I! It's rather nice. Quite apocalyptic, I think.

Harakiri · (#48 (**permalink**))

Pretty Good Poem I think ....... Sad Poems are better because ppl could learn from it but happy Poems would be good too..... It's all about the readers' moods .... Pretty Good I would like To read more poem from u

maitrekong · (#49 (**permalink**))

very nice poem

i write poems like yours but in french

musashi · (#50 (**permalink**))

You are welcome to post them.....I like the French language, it's so pretty....I want to post more, but I'm eating dinner right now...*stuffs food on mouth*