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03-18-2007, 01:57 AM
I can write haikus! here's 1:
Slicing Japan's sky Like a single tsunami Fujiyama's peak 
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03-19-2007, 07:18 PM
Ok, so, this is my new poem....It might be a little confusing so i'm going to give you a little of what it means...ok? Well, pretty much, it's all about living in your dream so you can follow it easier, and no matter what gets in your way, no matter what happens, no matter how long it takes, you still have to strive for it. It is also about how people will laugh at you and try to bring you down because they think your dream or goal in life is stupid.....you can't let that get to you and you have to keep going.....ok....now done with that....on with the poem! *charges*
The Nowhere Town Like the wind of winding strides Through the hills his soul rides Happily lost in a nowhere town Counting hoof beats as they hit the ground Though so sunny, the sky flashes grey Hiding the night in it's cloudy bay Still happily lost in a nowhere town Counting hoof beats as they hit the ground And then the skies open, still hiding the night But flashes show the land in bright mourning light The tears of the past fall withgreat pain The clouds soon roar, letting out all their shame The hills stand proud though shivered and soaked That covers his pathway like a dark cloak He's happily lost in a nowhere town Counting hoof beats as they hit the ground Riding through the midnight wood Not stopping to see, if only he could Blackness falls, surrounding him Leaving his life out on a limb Horrorous creatures stand in his way He slashes his sword through his monsterous prey He smiles happily lost in a nowhere town Counting hoof beats as they hit the ground Past the wood and into a feild An open enemy without a sheild An echo of hate and lowering laughter All the time, day and day after They peice with shame into his heart Hoping that soon, he'll fall apart But he's happily lost in a nowhere town Counting hoof beats as they hit the ground Riding past the feild and into the sea Becoming much braver than he'd ever be Into a watery hell he must go Fighting more defeats at the Ocean's below Drowning his body in shivering cold The rougher the waves, the harder to hold Still happily lost in a nowhere town Counting hoof beats as they hit the ground Up on the mountains all covered in snow Is the icey fate, through he must go And past the hard and frozen ground There will lie his nowhere town Through the blizzard icey cloud Not surrendering, never bowed Happily lost in a nowhere town Counting hoof beats as they hit the ground One more ride through the hot burning sun Just past the desert then his mission is done Close to reaching his main goal So close to making himself whole But minds have an awful play at hand And took Nowhere town away again He's still happy in a nowhere town Counting hoof beats as they hit the ground Now pass the desert and back to the hill He'll finish this mission with no force of will To follow his dream through rough and laughter He'll keep going and going, day and day after Like the wind of winding strides Through the hills his soul rides Happily lost in a nowhere town Counting hoof beats as they hit the ground What do you guys think?  If love is stupid, then I stupid you!  An Apple A Day Keeps Anyone Away If You Throw It Hard Enough...
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03-19-2007, 07:26 PM
Omg, it's great, Mu!
 It touches my heart... I can understand it so much I'm gonna cry... happily lost in my nowhere town, counting hoof beats as they hit the ground >_<" Seems I'm not the only one struggling. Thanks for the poem, Mu, now I know I'm not alone ^_^ There's no such thing as happy endings, for when you find true love, happiness is everlasting.
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03-19-2007, 07:29 PM
No one is ever alone CoolNard! *cries with you so you aren't alone!* LOL!
If love is stupid, then I stupid you! An Apple A Day Keeps Anyone Away If You Throw It Hard Enough...
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03-19-2007, 07:37 PM
OMG! OMG! OMG!
EEEK! Master, commander, queen-sama! This is unbelievable. You shouldn't need to dominate the world at all. The denizens of this dimention will only be too pleased to hand it to you on a silver platter praying for nothing more than everlasting rule! Omae mo kanjite no ka... kaze no koe?
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03-19-2007, 07:38 PM
*3 cheers for musashi are heard from the tormented depths of sanity*
yay for musashi ...  Really good poem ...great job indeed!
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