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03-19-2007, 07:59 PM

YEAH! This poem fires me with determination!

Amazing poem, as expected from someone so talented as yourself ^_^


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03-19-2007, 08:00 PM

Awww! You are too sweet! *blushes*


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03-19-2007, 08:01 PM

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Originally Posted by InsaneDoll View Post
*3 cheers for musashi are heard from the tormented depths of sanity*

yay for musashi ...
Really good poem ...great job indeed!
From the tormented depths of sanity???!!??? where do you pull lines like that out of??!?? It's just not normal... its surreal! *Open wide eyed adulation*




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03-19-2007, 08:09 PM

I have to admit.....I could never be that creative....lol!


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03-19-2007, 09:08 PM

MUSASHI^^ o may gosh what a lyrics
*cries*
aaaa it's sooo nice a sad and it's just so real
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03-19-2007, 10:17 PM

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
YOUR NOT SO CUTE
SO I'm TRYING SOMEONE NEW!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH!


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03-20-2007, 02:51 PM

@XtraPaint - Nice lyrics...

*Mutters ominously under his breath - I just hope that was not directed at anybody because if that was even remotely directed at Mu you had better bet your belching bippy we'll be singing that in chorus back to you... Nobody (and I mean nobody) bad mouths the master in her own thread!... Eh-heh! ...nothing at all... just a murmur in the air ... (Pshychotic killing frenzy is vividly apparent in his eyes)*




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03-20-2007, 02:57 PM

musashi i love love love the first one u posted...guilt!
ur an amazing poet keep m comin hun
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03-20-2007, 06:36 PM

YEAH! OMG! you guys are soooo supportive....and guess who is actually looking at publishing companies...? ME! lol...I have a new kind of confidence...lol

Right now i am kind of bored, so, let me post yet another poem for you all to read...lol.....

Fairy Tale

Love
A fairy tale i see in my eyes
The brave prince saves the princess when she cries
Just one kiss to free her before she dies
But only a fairy tale in my eyes

You
The savor of my broken city
The superman who flies through the blue sky
Who saves the damnsel from falling far down
But my broken city falls to the ground

Me
The only person who waits for you
Who can not wait for you to steal my breath
Who wishes time will hurry up and pass
Who is still under the spell you cast

Love
Still a fairy tale in my sad eyes
Will the prince save the princess when she cries?
Will he rush to kiss her before she dies?
I hope you will kiss me before I die...

yeah, thats it.....not in my top ten, but...whatever...


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03-21-2007, 08:41 PM

And another.....

Riding Through Darkness

Riding through the darkness
On a cold and lonely night
He cannot see the road
Let alone moonlight

Shadows follow him everywhere
Stalking his every move
And the echoing beats haunt him
From his horse’s hooves

The creaking of the crickets
The hooting of an owl
Fills the woods with thoughts
Of animals on the prowl

He rides alone in darkness
With everything to fear
Of animals, ghosts, and goblins
And hauntings coming near

The wind begins to pick up
Sending chills down his spine
He looks around the woods
But can barely see a pine

The breaking of a twig
Has his heart begin to race
With the shaking of his hands
A look of fear upon his face

And a dark and eerie voice
Begins to whisper in his ear
“I will come out and get you
If you don’t get out of here…”

But he just kept on riding
Trying to keep himself calm
Too bad it didn’t work this time
A cold sweat in his palm

That’s when he heard the noise
Behind him a sort of ring
Of hoof-beats coming closer
He turned to see nothing

Now shaking in his boots
As a wind blows up a chill
The poor scared man is riding
Get out of here he will

But he goes too fast too late
He never left the wood
The haunting of trees got him
His courage never stood

So when riding through the darkness
On a cold and lonely night
When you can’t see the road
Let alone moonlight

Shadows will follow you everywhere
And take heed to listen to
The hoof-beats coming closer
And the voice that will get you


(inspired by Sleepy Hallow.......tee hee)


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