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03-31-2007, 08:29 PM
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FLOWERS ROSES ARE RED VIOLETS ARE BLUE I DON'T KNOW HOW I SURVIVE WITHOUT YOU TULIPS ARE YELLOW DAISIES ARE WHITE OH HOW I WISH YOU WERE WITH ME TONIGHT or something like such......lol  If love is stupid, then I stupid you!  An Apple A Day Keeps Anyone Away If You Throw It Hard Enough...
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04-12-2007, 06:33 PM
Insane Nothing
Be there a method to my insanity? As dark a closed closet door as any A silent whisper of dead angel's breath Filling the ear of no one listening People walking but going no where People with places to go and yet not going The mourning of morning's sky Falling to the depths of the earth Freezing over but a hell Killing it's fire like a horrorous murder Pouring the blood to grow the weeds That surround it all once again In the darkness of a closed closet door Be there a method to my insanity? Krahe In the dark, behind the trees Across the misty lake In the room, by himself The darkness he shall take Through the window, cold as ice Lay the darkened day There sits upon an old fence Midnight black Krahe The chill of death crawls high Up the warm spine of man The black Krahe begins To cross the dead of land The darkness of the room Begins to fill his mind Leaving but a body A feast Krahe will find He slowly slips away No sign of Heaven's light Just the shadow of death A Krahe dark as night Terrifying tapping On window cold as ice In the gamble of death The Krahe has the dice Shattering of the glass Was the last thing to hear He has finally gone As Krahe pecks his ear In the dark, behind the trees Across the misty lake In the room, not alone The darkness Krahe ate I was in an "Edgar Allen Poe" mood when I wrote this....lol If love is stupid, then I stupid you! An Apple A Day Keeps Anyone Away If You Throw It Hard Enough...
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04-13-2007, 10:22 PM
OMG!
 Wow! That's just stunning... I don't know what to say Mu... It's too good to comment upon!I didn't know you write free verse as well. Great! BTW, why did you call it Krahe?  Omae mo kanjite no ka... kaze no koe?
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04-13-2007, 10:31 PM
Because it is a different......"it gives it an edgy feel" -Jen (friend)......It is german for "crow" supposidly.....lol
Glad it didn't scare you! LOL! If love is stupid, then I stupid you! An Apple A Day Keeps Anyone Away If You Throw It Hard Enough...
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04-14-2007, 04:25 PM
Can't feel scared when you're around
 ... You are superwoman after all  ... nevertheless, I write a lot of dark stuff myself so I don't totally flip it when I read a poem that way (It's on the Insane dahlia thread if you wanna read it...though come to think of it, I have removed some of the earlier posts)I gotta make a pick so I choose Krahe as my favourite! YEAH! It's very well written especially considering that if you don't know Krahe stood for crow, you could make a whole new interpretation of things Omae mo kanjite no ka... kaze no koe?
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04-14-2007, 06:25 PM
YEAH! Your right! OMG! I love you! But yeah, when i get around to it, i'll go check your's out....i love to read poems! But yeah, once again, glad you like!
If love is stupid, then I stupid you! An Apple A Day Keeps Anyone Away If You Throw It Hard Enough...
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04-14-2007, 07:13 PM
YEAH! I LOVE YOU TOO DOLL! How was 6 flags? You missed one hell of a dance last night! Dare i tell you about silly Manny? lol!
If love is stupid, then I stupid you! An Apple A Day Keeps Anyone Away If You Throw It Hard Enough...
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