JapanForum.com  


Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
(#21 (permalink))
Old
SweetSuicide's Avatar
SweetSuicide (Offline)
\m/ Rock hard love harder
 
Posts: 185
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: ... where only he can find me
Send a message via AIM to SweetSuicide Send a message via Skype™ to SweetSuicide
02-11-2007, 06:27 PM

I love your story!! I wrote one but it's not on this computer anymore *cries* It was really good. lol. I'll try to find it and put it up here. BTW... I <3333 your signature Yuri! Best song ever!



Life goes on.
But I'm gone.
Cause I'll die without you.
</3
Reply With Quote
(#22 (permalink))
Old
bleedingboy's Avatar
bleedingboy (Offline)
incandescent sleep
 
Posts: 68
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: china | philippines
Send a message via Yahoo to bleedingboy Send a message via Skype™ to bleedingboy
02-19-2007, 04:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by SweetSuicide View Post
**These are some of my poems that I wrote. ENJOY!*

Stuck In the Middle

Stuck in the middle
Of a love that was good
And a love that could win
Praying time will end it all
But each day that love
Grows stronger each day
Scaring me more and more
Tearing out my heart and soul
Praying for a time of no more pain
But knowing it will never come
As I watch a love fall apart
I try to see a new love grow
But it could never work becuase of
Being stuck in the middle
Is the worst place to be...


A Ghost, A Memory
You never were really here
But when you were here
The whole world seemed ok
At times we talked of
Our dreams and long walks
Every time you left, I cried

And I never knew why
Dad said it was for school
But it couldn't be true
You only came home once
In a big blue moon
Now you've been gone
For far too long and
I'm left with a ghost
A memory of you…

*please let me know what u think!!*

wow.. this is cool.


"evaporated the fur because it covers them if you only knew the plans they had for us." -the mars volta; eriatarka

i bet you have something sexy for me.. show it then!
Reply With Quote
(#23 (permalink))
Old
NanteNa's Avatar
NanteNa (Offline)
sixth gun.
 
Posts: 5,701
Join Date: Jan 2007
Send a message via Skype™ to NanteNa
02-19-2007, 05:07 PM

Little Rosie, walking across the lawn
Little Rosie, in the light of dawn

Little Rosie, screaming without a sound
Little Rosie, walking sleepless around

Little Rosie, if they could hear your song
Little Rosie, they'd be walking along

Little Rosie, will slit her bony wrists
Little Rosie, doesn't want to excist

Little Rosie, had a mind so rotten
Little Rosie, now dead and forgotten


[ <-- Jordan's heart! \(Ò_ó)/ ]
Follow me on TUMBLR
"Well if a chick has a problem with the way I conduct myself I'd draw the bitch
a map to the nearest exit and stamp "fuck off" on her forehead."
- Pot Roast
Reply With Quote
(#24 (permalink))
Old
Ayame90's Avatar
Ayame90 (Offline)
JF Old Timer
 
Posts: 320
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Illinois-United States
03-07-2007, 05:02 PM

Nice poem NanteNa.It's really a good poem.



The pic added goes to the ones whose ideas are in a box, to the ones who don't give respect to the one who doesn't fit in that box, stereotying one as I am. You'll soon learn your mistake in not getting the chance, because of Your Error to get to know as others have gotten to know, love, respect, and appreciate me for who I am and not for what you aim to make me.


あしゅり
のえる
Reply With Quote
(#25 (permalink))
Old
bleedingboy's Avatar
bleedingboy (Offline)
incandescent sleep
 
Posts: 68
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: china | philippines
Send a message via Yahoo to bleedingboy Send a message via Skype™ to bleedingboy
03-07-2007, 05:11 PM

this is a free form of poetry.

menu

fried chicken ----------------- 25 pesos
fried cat -------------------- 50 pesos
fried rice --------------------- 5 pesos
fried dog -------------------- 45 pesos
fried neighbor's noisy pet ------- priceless


"evaporated the fur because it covers them if you only knew the plans they had for us." -the mars volta; eriatarka

i bet you have something sexy for me.. show it then!
Reply With Quote
(#26 (permalink))
Old
Ayame90's Avatar
Ayame90 (Offline)
JF Old Timer
 
Posts: 320
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Illinois-United States
03-07-2007, 05:15 PM

Hahahahaha!
That was funny.



The pic added goes to the ones whose ideas are in a box, to the ones who don't give respect to the one who doesn't fit in that box, stereotying one as I am. You'll soon learn your mistake in not getting the chance, because of Your Error to get to know as others have gotten to know, love, respect, and appreciate me for who I am and not for what you aim to make me.


あしゅり
のえる
Reply With Quote
(#27 (permalink))
Old
SweetSuicide's Avatar
SweetSuicide (Offline)
\m/ Rock hard love harder
 
Posts: 185
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: ... where only he can find me
Send a message via AIM to SweetSuicide Send a message via Skype™ to SweetSuicide
03-07-2007, 10:14 PM

My face lies with fake smiles and false joy.
My soul longs for a single glince of hope.
I pour out lies just to make it through the day.
I want to be happy like I was many years ago.
The scars are proff of the worst of days.
The memories are signs of long gone days.
I'm lost and cold and broken iside.
I'm dead and lifeless all the time.
No one knows how I really feel inside.
No one can see what I have been through.
This is my cry for help and my final string.
This is my deciding chocie and the ice is gettin thin...

^^ I wrote it last night...



Life goes on.
But I'm gone.
Cause I'll die without you.
</3
Reply With Quote
(#28 (permalink))
Old
matttholen's Avatar
matttholen (Offline)
her and me, meant to be
 
Posts: 14
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: nj
Send a message via AIM to matttholen
03-07-2007, 10:34 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by SweetSuicide View Post
My face lies with fake smiles and false joy.
My soul longs for a single glince of hope.
I pour out lies just to make it through the day.
I want to be happy like I was many years ago.
The scars are proff of the worst of days.
The memories are signs of long gone days.
I'm lost and cold and broken iside.
I'm dead and lifeless all the time.
No one knows how I really feel inside.
No one can see what I have been through.
This is my cry for help and my final string.
This is my deciding chocie and the ice is gettin thin...

^^ I wrote it last night...


erica fuckin russell is my girl forever
Reply With Quote
(#29 (permalink))
Old
InsaneDoll's Avatar
InsaneDoll (Offline)
trve metal pygmy
 
Posts: 965
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: _____
03-08-2007, 12:03 PM

I`m experiencing the writer`s block right now...this is my last poem:

X

And I`m left here.. *sigh*


"I tell you what's really ridiculous - going into a bookstore and there's all these books about yourself. In a way, it feels like you're already dead."

Last edited by InsaneDoll : 03-08-2007 at 03:44 PM.
Reply With Quote
(#30 (permalink))
Old
SweetSuicide's Avatar
SweetSuicide (Offline)
\m/ Rock hard love harder
 
Posts: 185
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: ... where only he can find me
Send a message via AIM to SweetSuicide Send a message via Skype™ to SweetSuicide
03-15-2007, 12:41 AM

The nights grow longer
The days grow colder
Wishing time would stop
Faking a smile everyday
Of her horrible life
She tries so hard
To hide the scars
She sits in school
Dreading going home
Knowing what waits
Once she enters
Those horrible gates
She dreams of the day
She'll finally be free
To be carefree and loved
Not hated and scorned
She comes and leaves school
Fighting tears back everyday
Wishing someone could help
But also knowing that price
That would be paid if so
As she sits there and dreams
Her eyes start to tear
Wishing no on could hear
The sad, sorry tears
She dreams about death
In this cold lonely place
Never knowing true love
Or what it could have been
She tries so hard
To hide the scars
Faking a smile everyday
Of her horrible lie
Because the nights
They grow longer
And the days
They grow colder
But then, that
Wonderful day came
She was finally free
And all her dreams
Turned into reality
She was finally happy
She cried no more tears
all of her fears
simply disappeared

One I wrote about 2 weeks ago maybe?



Life goes on.
But I'm gone.
Cause I'll die without you.
</3
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On




Copyright 2003-2006 Virtual Japan.
SEO by vBSEO 3.0.0 RC6