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02-02-2007, 10:02 PM
They are all VERY VERY GOOD. And if u ask me the third one sounds like someone who would be ur protector or lover but they can basically be the same thing can't they
 
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02-02-2007, 10:04 PM
"My Shadow" written 10/13/06
Held in captivity Attached to a world I hate Trying desperately to get away But I can't run from my fate Forced to be my own shadow I want to break away Forced to stand beside myself When I just don't want to stay The only time I'm a little free Is in the dark at night Drowning in the numbness Until the sun brings light Then I'm just a shadow once more Forced to fall behind Her fascade Crying desperately to let me go Praying to an unanswering god All the pain I felt before Was nothing compared to this It seems as though I've been chosen To endure a soul-stealing kiss Trying to walk the other way But She always holds on Til one day when She's all that's me And I am all that's gone She is my body; my reality And I am Her shadow Forever following her steps She'll never let me go She smiles and laughs When I need to cry She goes on living When I need to die Blinded by the fear of our loss She just couldn't stand it Stricken by the reality of their lies She just didn't understand it So She seperated herself From all that was me She made me into Her shadow So She could forget who She used to be But now I'm held in chains Stuck in a world I hate Lurking in the darkness Unable to escape my fate Good? Bad? Yes? No?  I'm pretty content with life right now....For the most part, anyway....Well, at least, I'm pretty sure I am....
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02-02-2007, 10:08 PM
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 Thanks a lot! I've never really shown anyone my poems. Understand, though, that most of these poems are just POEMS. They may or may not reflect myself. It's just...writing somber, dreary, and strangely sad poems comes natural to me. *shiver* quite a few of my poems feature a young male who commits suicide. When I think of him, the name Kevin or Ben always come to my mind. Maybe he is a ghost who is haunting me. Who knows?? I'm pretty content with life right now....For the most part, anyway....Well, at least, I'm pretty sure I am....
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02-02-2007, 10:13 PM
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02-02-2007, 10:27 PM
My mom always used to tell me my poems were horrible because they were so depressing. She even burned a notebook I had once when I was 8 and 1/2. Believe it or not, in a way this poem is for my mom....anyway...here it is:
Roses, Love, And Smiles written 8/8/06 I can see it in your eyes Everytime I look, I see I know it deep inside my soul That you feel nothing for me All the things I do for you That you'll never realize All the blood I spill because Of all your hurtful lies Yet, sometimes still, I believe That maybe you really care But then when I need you most You are never there Roses, love, and smiles The things I imagine for us But my pain and scars Are the only things I trust Sometimes deep into the night When your face crosses my mind I wish I had the happiness I know I'll never find I'm pretty content with life right now....For the most part, anyway....Well, at least, I'm pretty sure I am....
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02-02-2007, 10:46 PM
Thanks everyone!
 No more poems for today, though...I'll post more when......well, if not tomorrow or sunday then DEFINETELY on monday. I promise! I'm pretty content with life right now....For the most part, anyway....Well, at least, I'm pretty sure I am....
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