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06-14-2009, 01:45 PM
I have quite a lot of art works and have no idea which one i should share >.<'
I hope it's okay for me to share just the entire gallery lol. 7oneders's deviantART gallery (btw, im new here ^.^') 神の光
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06-15-2009, 02:13 PM
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As for any critique, I'd say the design of that creature's face seems a little generic. I would change that. But damn. Be proud of your work! It's very good. EDIT: just noticed the fingers one the creature's left hand are a little out of proportion, compared to his other hand. |
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06-15-2009, 03:14 PM
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since this is more of an Art Help thread, it would be nice if you could select 1 or 2 specific drawings/photos that you'd like to have critiqued. Without that all I can say is that overall you have some pretty crazy stuff. Looks very... drug induced lol. It's a cool style you got, and you are very good with your colors. But we can't give you any specific tips without a specific painting/drawing/photo to look at. |
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06-16-2009, 01:53 AM
Quick sketch done today for fun.
warning huuuuuuuge file size! I don't do too many action poses, so I wanted to try that, also experimenting with action/speed lines and stuff. critiques would be nice! CLICK FOR FULL SIZE |
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06-16-2009, 02:06 AM
Nice, very nice. I see no qualms with the impaled figure, you did a very good job there.
The character on the left looks a bit off, it may be just me, his throwing arm seems a bit too long, though you see that a lot in many styles, overly long arms, so I don't know if that's what you were aiming at. There is something about his right leg. I know in this piece it's his center of balance, but something about it is throwing me off. The details are so minor though, it doesn't affect the grandness at all. Also it be great if you could bring the photo down to a 700 pixel width, since it's stretching the page. |
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06-16-2009, 02:24 AM
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about his leg, i think it's his knee, that's screwing it up. It's pointing in a different direction than his shoe. which i just noticed now. thanks a lot man, Wouldn't have noticed those problems if you hadn't pointed them out for me. |
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