Art help. Post your art

[InuAisu]

Originally Posted by MMM

Actually I don't think there is anything wrong with the composition. You are drawn to the creature's eyes, then to what he is looking at. The fact that we can't see what he is looking at is what makes the composition unnerving, and that is a good thing. Put a butterfly in the space, and I see "creature looking at butterfly"....YAWN!

Leave it as is and the picture tells a story and the viewer can't help but wonder what will happen next.

It's perfect, don't change a thing.

I defenitely agree! It adds a good mystery!! It gives the imagination of the viewer a chance to finish the picture!

[InuAisu]

Originally Posted by alanX

Sweet! An art thread! Do photoshop creations count? I hope so.

I love the ととろ picture, my friend. The simplicity of it is what I like about this type of art.

All comments are greatly appreciated.

OHEMGEE!! They were so pretty!! I liked the one with the red splatter with the streams coming out! Did you draw the lil fella in yer sig? He's so cute! <3

[alanX]

Originally Posted by InuAisu

OHEMGEE!! They were so pretty!! I liked the one with the red splatter with the streams coming out! Did you draw the lil fella in yer sig? He's so cute! <3

Hahaha thanks so much! ^^

No, I just edited it and whatnot. Here's the original:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v9...g?t=1241045006

[RKitagawa]

Originally Posted by MMM

It's perfect, don't change a thing.

lol thanks MMM, i do appreciate that, but I also agree with Troo about the blank space on the left, it just seems that there is something missing.

and besides, i already added stuff to my picture before i saw your comment, haha



I did however try to keep some story to it, and i think i still have a little of that "what happens next?" in it.
anyways, hope you guys like the finished product
thanks again

[MMM]

Originally Posted by RKitagawa

lol thanks MMM, i do appreciate that, but I also agree with Troo about the blank space on the left, it just seems that there is something missing.

and besides, i already added stuff to my picture before i saw your comment, haha


I did however try to keep some story to it, and i think i still have a little of that "what happens next?" in it.
anyways, hope you guys like the finished product
thanks again

I like this, too. You have some real talent, but if I had to choose one or the other, I liked the first version better. The tension is almost all gone in the second version.

[alanX]

Originally Posted by MMM

I like this, too. You have some real talent, but if I had to choose one or the other, I liked the first version better. The tension is almost all gone in the second version.

I agree, not that there is anything wrong with the second one.

Like I said before, I love the simplicity of the first one, and I too see some talent

^_^

[Pexster]

RKitagawa, Ypsilanti, InuAisu, and alanX, you're guys work is amazing. ^^v

[SephirothVVC]

@alan- i think the one with the smoke is the best^.^

[Pexster]

Yeah I liked that one alot too and the monkey haha

[RKitagawa]

whoah so many posts, gonna be hard keeping up with them all. alright, gonna start from InuAisu:
I love the dog! so cute lol

the main problem with this one is your line of action, see how he's leaning to his right?
kinda looks like hes gonna fall over.

heres a quick sketch to show u what i mean.



u should always make sure the character is balanced unless its in the middle of an action, ie. running, jumping, etc...
but since your character is simply standing, he should be balanced.
keep up the good work though! would love to see more from you