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07-12-2009, 07:43 PM

Great thread. I do have to agree that hands can be murder, but does pay off if you work on it and not just have sausages for fingers.

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07-12-2009, 10:09 PM

Heres a picture i made of michael jackson. the shading didnt come out so i lowered the lighting
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WOW, did you actually draw that first one? I honestly thought it was a photo at first. You should be very proud of your drawings l00pdel00p.
As for any critique, I'd say the design of that creature's face seems a little generic. I would change that.

But damn. Be proud of your work! It's very good.

EDIT: just noticed the fingers one the creature's left hand are a little out of proportion, compared to his other hand.
im really late in replying but thankyou so much for the help
I have changed the hand and the face now and i think that it looks better ...i hope haha thankyouuuu

also im sorry im being greedy here but if you have time could you please help me with this picture i think it is all wrong i have the head positioning and scale wrong i think but once you have been looking at things for so long its hard to see whats right and wrong anymore ¬.¬ any help would be muchly appreciated

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Heres a picture i made of michael jackson. the shading didnt come out so i lowered the lighting
It's not too bad. though I think his lips are over too far to the right. or maybe it's that a bit too long.

and maybe the eyes are a bit too big... width-wise.

I'm not really sure about the nose.


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Kamen Rider Kiva fan art =)

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Great thread. I do have to agree that hands can be murder, but does pay off if you work on it and not just have sausages for fingers.
yup yup, hands are tough. I tend to draw simple sausage hands a lot just cause I find them so hard. But I'm workin on it!
Glad to see you posting here ThuMpeR, I'm a big fan of your art over on DA.

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Heres a picture i made of michael jackson. the shading didnt come out so i lowered the lighting


main problem i see is that his nose looks flat, like it doesn't stick out off of his face, try drawing basic 3D shapes to get a hang of it. the nose is pretty cube like, so drawing cubes should help.

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also im sorry im being greedy here but if you have time could you please help me with this picture i think it is all wrong i have the head positioning and scale wrong i think but once you have been looking at things for so long its hard to see whats right and wrong anymore ¬.¬ any help would be muchly appreciated


Made some very minor tweaks.
Eyes were a tiiiiny bit too far away from each other.
and the nose mouth and chin were rotated a bit on the wrong angle.
They should be perpendicular to the center line going down the face.
but like i said, very minor tweaks, very minor problems.
hope this helps.
BTW the color and lighting is fantastic

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07-20-2009, 01:02 PM

ehh, there are so many nice artist here. I'm just a beginner. Just try out some during my spare time. Here's one. Hope you guys like it

Warrior by ~reetesh on deviantART

Edited it down to a link so it doesn't stretch the page.
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http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww180/s-hadow/hands-1.jpg

Kitagawa, I really like your advice on hands, it is great help to a starter artist, as well as others like me, who have been doing art for years and years.

Nice drafts here.
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@Kanji
Thanks, and your welcome. Glad to be of service.

@Reet - Hey man, sorry I took so long to reply. But I thought I would try something a little different this time. Instead of simply showing the final paintover and talking about what I did (which is what I usually do). I thought it would be cool to record the whole process. Please let me know if you think this helps more than just an image, because I'm not sure if I will continue to do this.



Hope you can read the text, I know my witting is messy and it goes by really quick. Sorry! Also, I didn't really know what I was trying to say at a few points, haha. Hope you can still understand what I was getting at.

P.S. I put some music to it to make it more entertaining. But the youtube guys disabled it. sorry lol, had to swap it out for some crappy music from the site.

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07-24-2009, 08:14 PM

Here some of mine:

NekoMizukiichan on deviantART


None of really is my best work it was just some of the ones that were small enough to scan
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Here some of mine:

NekoMizukiichan on deviantART


None of really is my best work it was just some of the ones that were small enough to scan
haha, cute. I like your style.
If you'd like, I can critique one for you. Just pick any picture that u want advice on.
You don't have to of course, but I can't really critique your whole gallery.
lol, I like it though. Keep up the good work
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