Poem: Scar From one Lover

[MMM]

Originally Posted by Eiri02

Thanx I just edited it LOL...if u see anything I've overlooked feel free to let me know...and thank you again!

The word "nostalgia" shouldn't be capitalized or have the letter "e".

[Eiri02]

Originally Posted by MMM

The word "nostalgia" shouldn't be capitalized or have the letter "e".

aha how right you are and thanx again...I simply must do better about that!

[nobora]

Originally Posted by Eiri02

Yes LOL...but once one is able to write these things out for others to read and relate to they can begin to recover from these everday tragedies

I wish I could write stuff like this too.

[Eiri02]

I wish everyone could just write out what they feel instead of acting on irrational emotions...I think the world would be a much safer and peaceful place if that were so

[nobora]

It would be. I do act on irrational emotions all the time.

[vithvicious]

One could argue that Love is an irrational emotion.......

/cliche off.....

[dogsbody70]

writing poetry is very cathartic and good therapy.

so many poems about love and rejection.

Its so much easier never to love-- because of the pain

[vithvicious]

Well in that case I would venture to say that we shouldn't live either.

Eventually we all die and dying can be painful.

[dogsbody70]

aaaaaaaaaaaaah maybe Ha ha.

[TalnSG]

Originally Posted by dogsbody70

writing poetry is very cathartic and good therapy.

so many poems about love and rejection.

Its so much easier never to love-- because of the pain

Cathartic indeed! My works written in angst, whatever the source, are always better than those written about passing thoughts. The lighter ones are worthy, but have far less impact on both myself and others.

As for it being easier never to love and avoid pain - it doesn't work.
It only subtitutes pain of emptiness and deprivation for the pain of loss.
To emulate my favorite poet, Dorothy Parker "you might as well live." In this case, love.