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10-09-2010, 08:44 AM

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Thanks!
I actually thought it was bad, but okay. =3

Your poems are beautiful too. The one called "Mother Mum Billie",
almost made me cry. I loved it.

Hello again, never was your poem anything but expressing your love.

I thought it beautiful.

thanks also for your kind comments.

Let us see more from you.
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10-09-2010, 09:23 PM

I saww my boyfriend todayy. He had a little puppy with him that he'd gotten from a homeless lady. One of it's ears was cut down, and it's tail was injured a bit.
It made me so sad, but the puppy was still so hyper and happy. So,, I wrote this. ♥


Don’t laugh!
I cry out as they crowd around me.

Stop!
Tears fill my eyes as I crouch even farther down.

Leave it alone!
They refuse to leave, crowding even more.

The tears spill over as I lay hunched over it,
protecting the poor creature.
It’s so defenseless!
Leave it alone!

A whimper escapes from beneath me,
and a small scuffed up nose peeks out, sniffing all around.

No!
I cry out to it.

Get back in! They’ll hurt you!
It whimpers again, pressing against me,
Shaking and shivering.

Give it up girl,
one say mockingly.
It’s no use,
another says.

No! You can’t!!
But,..
They take him anyway.

My whole body shakes,
My small innocent six-year old body.
How can they do that to it?
It’s just a puppy!

And I lay there crying, hoping and praying the poor,
Innocent thing,

Will be okayy..


8/21/09
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10-09-2010, 09:47 PM

I hope it will be okay. what a lovely sentimental poem.
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10-09-2010, 09:53 PM

Yea,, he says he will give it a good home, thank goodness. And I just noticed I tend to write in the same formatt. : D

Any poems from you that you'd like to share?


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10-09-2010, 10:16 PM

I'll try to find some to put in tomorrow. Meanwhile Keep writing.

this is a very short one.



Think of your friends

Know their Love

Wear it as a garland

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10-11-2010, 10:45 AM

SItting on the top deck of a bus


From where I sit the sea could be just like a carpet
the ripples like the tufts you tug
when lying on the home hearthrug
Patterns are cast from clouds above
Unconstant, changing never true
today the sea so calm defies, deceives
for even on the calmest day
It hides the turbulence below
Just like the face of all mankind
which blank serenity portrays
'Tis lies, for deep within that calm facade
Lie terrors, fears, Man from his mind is never free
It plays with him

Just like the wild, the restless sea.

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10-11-2010, 10:55 AM

SOCIETY


Society doth tell a man
He must never ever cry
Tho' weaker woman sometimes can
Embarrassed it makes others sigh
Emotion for to spy
The deep relief--it cannot flow

when harnessed.
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10-15-2010, 05:15 AM

You led her on,
With lies and kisses.
Now you betray her? Gonna leave her broken?

Really?

One sentence. And it was shattered.
“Let’s take a break”
And she knew it was done. You wouldn’t stay.

You already acted so.. so.. distant.
Slowly breaking down her walls.
Slowly crushing the heart you held in your hands.
God, why?!

A month.
Now the phrase has changed, but she’s expecting it.

“I can’t do this anymore. Goodbye.”

Did you know? With that one sentence, one fucking phrase..
She died that day.
You killed her. She lived physically, but mentally?
Emotionally?
She was dead. A shell..

WHY?
Why would you murder her?
“I’ll never leave you. You’re my heart and soul”
LIES!

She never knew someone could be so skilled at lying.
And now?
She’s dead. Everything has been taken from Her.

Hah..
After all.. no one can live without a heart.


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Writtenn for a friendd who got hurtt. Gahhh I wishh I could get that guy.


8/21/09

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10-15-2010, 06:51 AM

I thought I'd write a poem for your thread
I looked inside...

nothing but dead.

(sorry)

There's a lot of talent and passion here.
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10-15-2010, 08:15 PM



Is there a bridge wide enough to span the chasm between us?

Are our different cultures too set to allow freedom between us.

Is Time too short to work the miracle required

to simply Bridge that Chasm.

can we not free our minds to all possibilities
or do we close the door for all time?

simply give in to our former experiences, habits and culture.

Soon T'will be too late, opportunities forever lost.

Is it possible? what say You?

I give my hand across that void -- will you take it?

Or simply allow me to fall into its depths-- ALONE.

You turning your back for ever

which will it be?

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