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07-03-2007, 04:36 AM
Umm.... you could also so use a complex rhyme scheme... such as a certain amount of syllables per line, with each line rhyming!. All poems don't have to rhyme, but the ones that rhyme are more memorable! Take this one I wrote for an example!...
The lies, the truth. Deceit, the proof. Deceived by you. Stolen, my youth. Was I the fool, For loving you? What should I do? Abandon you? Try to pull through? Shed tears for you? I thought you knew That I loved you. I feel so used. Also confused. My heart's imbued A crimson hue. I must renew. I must pursue For the debut of me, post-you!  Microsoft is making computer's just like air conditioners; they work properly until you open WINDOWS.
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07-03-2007, 05:10 AM
aww its beautiful love.. i havent finished them .. no... but i will!
JOIN TODAY!!!!!!!!! wife of dreamyourworld  GrandDaughter of-Wolfrainvn daughter of-maku niece of-Fuu Nantena yamamato sister of-Marukyusu Kakashi Jo_Kittie himechan ToKyObOxRoBoT Aunt of-obscureLOVE cousin to-Rikku777 musashi Yuri Hisuwashi FANS!!! <333 animedude3
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07-03-2007, 05:16 AM
it happens
and btw reita NEVER dies JOIN TODAY!!!!!!!!! wife of dreamyourworld GrandDaughter of-Wolfrainvn daughter of-maku niece of-Fuu Nantena yamamato sister of-Marukyusu Kakashi Jo_Kittie himechan ToKyObOxRoBoT Aunt of-obscureLOVE cousin to-Rikku777 musashi Yuri Hisuwashi FANS!!! <333 animedude3
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07-16-2007, 04:08 AM
wow i really like what you wrote.
and maybe i got an idea how about you try writing some songs or something. cause they are poems just with a different set up maybe you'll get inspired or something. idk just an idea maybe ill post some of my songs up on here. The Moon Makes Faces At The Tree's... It's So Nice To Make Fun Of Everything... That I Lost And I Miss And I Loved But Never Had... Im So Happy I Could..." My Lyrics Thread Cousin - Kakashi Poetry Buddy - lpdirufangirl09
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07-16-2007, 04:33 AM
heya no aka_______________________
here, take a sip. sit and talk a while. as our laughter lingers across your drunken smile. you're mine now. i'll take your hand in mine and look into your eyes. build up a little trust. tell a few white lies. you're mine now. press your lips against mine. let's see whats up these stairs. use this bandana to hide your eyes. there's a surprise up here you're mine now. several moments pass. you're lying on the floor. gasping to catch your breath. i'm glad a locked the door. you're mine now. do you like how i painted the room? it's my favorite color, red. i think it just screams 'you'. too bad you're dead. you're mine now. i get to keep you forever. a pretty memory in my head. i see you everywhere. you surround me as i lie in bed. you're mine now.  I'll bloom as the poison flower and become the flower that blooms again.
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07-18-2007, 07:35 PM
we are worlds apart.
perfect strangers to each. i feel something from you. but you're too far to reach. as you walk beneath the moon, my sun is beaming, bright as can be. i see you when i dream. do you ever think of me? I'll bloom as the poison flower and become the flower that blooms again.
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