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07-19-2007, 04:32 AM
eternity_________________
the stars that shine bright in the sky will, in due time, fall and be gone taking their place is another knowing it's fate but there is one one lonely star that remains there a sign of hope it will not fade eternity shine in midair  I'll bloom as the poison flower and become the flower that blooms again. 
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07-19-2007, 04:44 AM
your tires squeal against the pavement..
saying, "goodbye, i just can't love you anymore." with an apathetic attitude i'm thinking 'what a mistake..' but who cares? i don't need you anyways. that dress you bought for me looks good on my best friend. the ring you wouldn't take back, wonder how much money i could get. and thanks for supporting my pyromania, our pictures give me something to burn. you'll come crawling back to me i'll laugh when you say your lesson's learned. I'll bloom as the poison flower and become the flower that blooms again.
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07-30-2007, 07:20 PM
I'm mostly for the seven syllable a b a b. That's tougher than the a b c b scheme but it gives more poetic grace. Seven syllable is easier to write than eight.
You're right though, free verse is best suited for deep emotions. Somehow though after a while it just seems to me like bent prose when I write it. I'd much rather fancy a well written essay at times. I've always been pro-rhyme scheme from the start. The challenge just eggs me on to write it better ^_^. Keep those great poems coming IDF!   Omae mo kanjite no ka... kaze no koe?
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02-04-2008, 03:03 AM
Courage______________________
she stands on the shore watching the rise and the fall of the tide alone and wearing her heart on her sleeve the white tips of the wave reminds her of the sparkle in his eyes and the sunset is his smile it makes her heart beat the sand between her thin fingers it is the way their hands interlaced like the last time they said goodbye she's walking towards the water and the pain hurts a little more she says, "it's so stupid", what she's doing this for a sigh is released as she walks closer the water is at her knees she takes a leap of courage and lets herself go her body is screaming for help her heart is saying "no," the air from her lungs has vanished and it's starting to show he stands on the shore watching the rise and the fall of the tide he regrets what he said to her and wishes he had the courage to apologize I'll bloom as the poison flower and become the flower that blooms again.
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02-04-2008, 03:04 AM
Our Salty Moon_________
Let's sit beside the sea. No one else, Just you and me. Let's dig our bare feet Into the taupe sand. Let's let the waves crash onto us As we sit together, hand in hand. Let's forget the world. Tonight, all we need is each other. Your chest is my pillow, The midnight sky is my cover. I'll bloom as the poison flower and become the flower that blooms again.
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02-04-2008, 03:06 AM
Winter Love_________________
A snow covered forest stands still Two pairs of footprints make a secret trail The ground crunches below us Colossal trees become so very frail Hand in hand together All but our hearts are cold A touch like a heat wave in winter No feelings are left untold The last two people on earth Or so we seem to be My eyes carefully focused on you And yours steadily on me I'll bloom as the poison flower and become the flower that blooms again.
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