English freestyle Haiku thread - Page 3

kitski · (#21 (**permalink**))

trapped again in this box
a box what i call plain work
evening come sooner

Excessum · (#22 (**permalink**))

breaking walls
my fists are bleeding
a ray of light

kitski · (#23 (**permalink**))

under the starry sky
warm breeze welcomes me
is this summer sign?

Fyer · (#24 (**permalink**))

Unable to breathe,
Your eyes into mine,
Your indescribable love.

Excessum · (#25 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fyer

Unable to breathe,
Your eyes into mine,
Your indescribable love.

awsm!

spitting the blood
aching fists
to fight is to lose

Yggdrazzil · (#26 (**permalink**))

nervous sweaty palms
another glance your way
dare I approach you?

Baaaaaaaaaaaaaah Its hard to come up with something that creates atmosphere in so few words!!!

Acidreptile · (#27 (**permalink**))

Minority against majority
Maniac madness invasion
Chaos unleashed
Only one shall win

Excessum · (#28 (**permalink**))

that's the whole point ^^

running down the hill
away from your past
to fall down and break your neck

1... 2... 3... 4... metaphors in just 3 lines o_O i'm getting the hang of this...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Acidreptile

Minority against majority
Maniac madness invasion
Chaos unleashed
Only one shall win

khm... only 3 lines and 18 syllables in a haiku AR, pwease!

Yggdrazzil · (#29 (**permalink**))

Yeah yer pretty good at it

Yggdrazzil · (#30 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by Acidreptile

Minority against majority
Maniac madness invasion
Chaos unleashed
Only one shall win

-the whole haiku must consist of not more than 18 syllables
-there must not be more than 3 lines per haiku
-haiku is not a report or description of surroundings, usage of irony and juicy metaphors is highly welcome.