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07-11-2007, 05:32 PM

You don't know me
I might beat you
I'm better than you expect
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07-11-2007, 05:32 PM

here's mine:

I used to collect
shiny state quarters, until...
the ice cream truck came.

Humpty-Dumpty-san:
If you go on a diet,
you won't fall again.



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07-11-2007, 07:47 PM

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here's mine:

I used to collect
shiny state quarters, until...
the ice cream truck came.

Humpty-Dumpty-san:
If you go on a diet,
you won't fall again.

that ain't quite a haiku, imho

wings are spread
tears are falling
darkness


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07-11-2007, 10:06 PM

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awsm!

spitting the blood
aching fists
to fight is to lose
Thanks~

Watching the Sky,
Fade into Amber,
A sigh escapes and so does my life.

...is that emo or is it just me?


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07-11-2007, 10:22 PM

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Thanks~

Watching the Sky,
Fade into Amber,
A sigh escapes and so does my life.

...is that emo or is it just me?
doesn't matter... you have some skills... nice metaphors and exactly 18 syllables :3 Keep 'em coming!

hear the heart stopping
the body gets cold
darkness... is that what awaits us?


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07-11-2007, 10:36 PM

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doesn't matter... you have some skills... nice metaphors and exactly 18 syllables :3 Keep 'em coming!

hear the heart stopping
the body gets cold
darkness... is that what awaits us?
^_^ I love it. ^^^

Exasperating,
Unable To Withstand,
Your Lurking In The Darkness...


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07-12-2007, 01:46 PM

glass gets empty
you walk away
rapacity?


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07-12-2007, 05:45 PM

Seeing through closed eyes,
Hearing through covered ears,
Unable to whisper your name...


Backing down,
Quivering with anticipation,
Controlling emotion.


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Seeing through closed eyes,
Hearing through covered ears,
Unable to whisper your name...

Very interesting... can be understood in at least 3 different ways, nice!

Here's mine:

dancing around the fire
letting the life burn
till dawn goes to sleep


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Very interesting... can be understood in at least 3 different ways, nice!

Here's mine:

dancing around the fire
letting the life burn
till dawn goes to sleep
..Three? I can only think of two.. O-o; FIRE~! ^__^

Billowing like steam,
Unable to breathe,
The heat lighting up disaster


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