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02-05-2008, 11:33 AM
EEEPPP! no one's been here..... Oh well....sorry for the double post....
Darkness is here to stay, Please me with what I need today. Young, old, live, dead anything works in my stead. hope for yourself. That you taste like mud. hahaha wish again, I want your blood. Anguish, pain, or relief? I'll give you more than just belief. Come to me and you'll be eased... of all the pain, I will be pleased. For I am Darkness The one named Dragoness  Property of Eiri & Pexster Virtual Boyfriend...Hyakushi in *Indian suit*  Eiri - 41 : Rojjin -43 : Sly - 121 : Yuna7780 - 57 : reihino - 14 : Crani - 22 : Ramones1976 - 0 : AnimeBaby112 - 3 : Arikado - 1 : KikiBunny23 - 3 : Pexter -0 
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02-05-2008, 11:40 AM
king of darkness.
prince of blood kiss my wounded heart and steal my soul bathe my body in the blood of our enemies kiss my broken arms and lick my broken legs miss my heart as i miss the blade that took his life the life of another the life of my father oh fallen king worship my lips and praise my face touch my body as if it was the last thing that had value in the messed up world.. i love you today but i will kill you tomorrow my fallen king ,suju ,dbsk ,bigbang only loving you K-POP!!!! 
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02-05-2008, 12:12 PM
Depressed Nightmare There I was sitting in my car I had this sudden urge to drive away into the sunset. I pushed the pedal to the metal, blinded from the sun my car hits a bump. A few seconds later, a man's torso hits my window. *shatter* The man's torso landed right next to me.... I didn't scream I just skidded to a stop I looked in my left side mirror first I saw the man's lower half a few feet behind me. Blood was squirting out every which way. My seat was getting drenched I thought that I had pi'd my skirt, but it felt gushy warm and I thought my period came. I looked down at myself and noticed the blood all over my seat, yet I didn't sceam. "Bi..t..ch" I heard a moaned whisper. I still didn't scream. I looked to my right saw the man looking at me as he heavily breathed. I stared at him, he looked familiar. He wasn't a family member I'm sure of it. I think I had seen his pic before. But I couldn't figure out where........ He suddenly out of nowhere grabbed me by the neck. Wow! For an almost dead person he was pretty strong I tried to back away, but I was not able to get free from his grip and then he tried to pull me closer to his face my seatbelt wouldn't allow it "Yes!" I thought to myself. "b..ch" He could barely make his words come out. I had thought that by now he were dead. I put both my hands on his chest to try and push him away. But it was no use he had a very firm grip on my neck then his grip started to tighten. "I mmmm me" a surge of panic went throughout my body. "He wants to kill me" I thought to myself. His thumbs were pushing hard into my throat, for some reason tears started to well up into my eyes, either from pain or fear or maybe both. But I wasn't about to let him kill me. "I'm too young to die." I thought to myself. "hugh hugh hugh." He sounded like he was laughing at me. I tried to pull his fingers, but he was too strong. Maybe I was dying too. I had to fight back so I had to try something or else I'd be dead. And so I hit his elbows hard and it only made it worse his grip was too strong. My face was forced closer to his. I could smell his breath, he had been chewing ice breaker bubble gum. I had to think of something and quickly my world was about to end. "Jeez, for a dying man, he's strong." I thought to myself. As my sight began to see my surroundings start to fade. I remembered what my cousin had said once before "Hit them right below the frontal rib cage....dead center." I did just that and it worked. He let go of me. I began a cough attack from the lack of air. I felt dizzy and I looked over at him. He was wheezing for life. "I ...ud....u" was what he said before he let out his last breath of life. I was confused. His body began to violently shake for a few minutes. It had finally settled, I looked down a the man. I got closer to his pale white face I realized who it was tears overcame me. "NOOOO!" It was he the one I loved. Property of Eiri & Pexster Virtual Boyfriend...Hyakushi in *Indian suit* Eiri - 41 : Rojjin -43 : Sly - 121 : Yuna7780 - 57 : reihino - 14 : Crani - 22 : Ramones1976 - 0 : AnimeBaby112 - 3 : Arikado - 1 : KikiBunny23 - 3 : Pexter -0
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02-06-2008, 01:37 PM
Sly-san, Tifa! Really dark poems. Great going guys!
Sly-san - Do you mostly just write free verse or do you do rhyme schemes as well?  Omae mo kanjite no ka... kaze no koe?
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02-06-2008, 01:50 PM
whatever my mood is.....It goes either way....
WARNING :  mindful roller coasting is dangerous  Property of Eiri & Pexster Virtual Boyfriend...Hyakushi in *Indian suit* Eiri - 41 : Rojjin -43 : Sly - 121 : Yuna7780 - 57 : reihino - 14 : Crani - 22 : Ramones1976 - 0 : AnimeBaby112 - 3 : Arikado - 1 : KikiBunny23 - 3 : Pexter -0
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02-06-2008, 01:51 PM
Silence…
Taciturnity or refusal to speak… The walls can listen No noise or even a commotion… Silence… Emptiness inside… Bareness in a diminutive site… Will there ever be a revolution? Just change this desolation… Silence… If masonry could speak It would understand this despair… The solemnness of which… Just so difficult to bear Silence… There's no such thing as happy endings, for when you find true love, happiness is everlasting.
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02-06-2008, 01:54 PM
Holy Freaking s**t!
... Cooly is like the silent killer of JF. For ages together we don't see a single poem and all of a sudden.. BOOM! An atomic poetry bomb comes forth.Awesome writing cooly! Your half finished sentences certainly motivate better imagery! @Sly-san - Pweese post up one of your rhyming poems as well! I've noticed that almost all of your poems here are still free verse... O_O Omae mo kanjite no ka... kaze no koe?
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02-06-2008, 02:04 PM
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Speaking of not seeing a single poem, Aoshi-san, you should really put up a few of your own and show 'em what poetry's all about. Dark or fat, deep or long... Anything that's yours! =D Edit: Eh... With regards to tale of storys, my next entry shall take a lil longer than desired... beg pardon ^_^; There's no such thing as happy endings, for when you find true love, happiness is everlasting.
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02-06-2008, 02:15 PM
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No problem, thanks hehe! Your words have truly motivated me to begin.... later on! Property of Eiri & Pexster Virtual Boyfriend...Hyakushi in *Indian suit* Eiri - 41 : Rojjin -43 : Sly - 121 : Yuna7780 - 57 : reihino - 14 : Crani - 22 : Ramones1976 - 0 : AnimeBaby112 - 3 : Arikado - 1 : KikiBunny23 - 3 : Pexter -0
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02-06-2008, 02:19 PM
Hmph! Cooly always turns the tables on flattery! I don't know where he gets the knack >___<
Well I've been concentrating on prose for the last couple of months and more so recently with the storys thread  Maybe I should stir up I.D to write some poems so I could sing my duets again ^_^ Omae mo kanjite no ka... kaze no koe?
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