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10-04-2007, 12:51 AM

Very good SweetSuicide very good!
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untitled... - 10-04-2007, 01:56 PM

this is a song not a poem,
but it's pretty deep...


(intro)
i'm surrounded
by faces with no names
and they can't see mee
as i'm lying here in chains
their eyes are clouded
their minds are filled with lies
as the helpless go on bleeding
and the tourtured choke and die

they can't see us
can't see past their mundane lives
can't see the blood
can't hear the words that stab like knives
won't see the wounds that they've inflicted
untill it's much to late to cure
while dreams are crshed
and voices hushed
by the ones that think they're pure

prechorus:

insanity
cruelty
caged inside
locked and unseen
reality
is choking me
outside i'm fine
inside hearts scream
chorus:

and the pain
that we feel
is all too real
as we wait
in the shadows
for someone to heal
broken hearts
torn apart
and then
thrown in our faces
dissapear
and leave empty
hollow dark spaces
verse:

as the rain falls
from above us we're glad
cause it hides what
comes from eyes when we're sad
they don't notice
scars from pain through the years
as the words that we're speaking
fall on unhearing deaf ears
(pre chorus)
(chorus)
end verse:

forgotten
alone
and in pain
the solitude
drives me insane
so crowded
at the same time
im lonely
if only they'd listen
if only______



by: Ana Corpse


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10-04-2007, 02:27 PM

If one could only see,
The world through my eyes.
Where hope is just a mystery,
Where life is bound by blood.

Where darkness feels like a feather,
Where shadows seem to breathe.
If one could only see,
The deceiving power
Of light.

Angels who cry and scream,
To be freed from the cage of God.
To be swallowed by the taste of freedom.

If one could only see,
The heartbeats through the air.
Floating like ghosts,
Beating like a march.

If one could only see,
The world through my eyes.
The one,
Would die.
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10-08-2007, 01:59 PM

I wrote 15 new ones in 2 days so here's a start...

#3/15



The sun sets
I'm ready for another night
Passing through body after body
Crying mother, worried father, lost child

Close your eyes and dream
Of a quiet place
Where you can lay down
Soon to die in unheard screams

Drowing size pools
Of tears
Flow from your bloodshot eyes
Black holes consume
Your once beautiful face



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10-18-2007, 10:54 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MaymeRachael View Post
I wrote 15 new ones in 2 days so here's a start...

#3/15



The sun sets
I'm ready for another night
Passing through body after body
Crying mother, worried father, lost child

Close your eyes and dream
Of a quiet place
Where you can lay down
Soon to die in unheard screams

Drowing size pools
Of tears
Flow from your bloodshot eyes
Black holes consume
Your once beautiful face



MaymeRachael
Very cool that one sister!!!!!!!!!
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10-19-2007, 06:17 PM

Awww thank you I'll post others later.......maybe ^^ SO STAY TUNED ^_^'


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10-22-2007, 02:04 AM

All of you are so good. Here is a poem of mine.

My world of darkness
Covered in fear
My hate is blinded
By my bloody tears

My darker truth
With hidden lies
My evil spirit
Somewhere it hides

My blacken heart
Slowly beats
My deadly love
Devours me there is no more time

My empty soul
Withers away
To be lost and forgotten
Never to be seen by the day

My blood blackens the day
There is no other way
The darkness will pay
No matter what anyone says

My world of nothingness
Covered in darkness
I won’t let it win
Won’t ever give in
I will never fall


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10-25-2007, 02:35 AM

#8/15

Open up my chest
Undo my veins
And claim my heart
For your own

The last words
You wanted to hear
Was that I wasn't leaving
Your contract
Lasts even after death

Do you care at all
That I'm crying tears of blood
All because I love you?
You turned your back
And walked away
Soaked by the winter rain
Then burst into flames...





*?????????*


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10-25-2007, 03:03 AM

Lets see...I'll try to write this one on the spot, and quick, because I have math to do and shows to watch ^_^

Thoughts of a vampire

Savor the lasting flavor as it lingers in your mouth, as the salt flows over your tongue, a bed of roses never as sweet as this. A solid scream breaks through the viel of night, disrupting it's quiet admirers as they gaze at the stars that seem so close. As the flood flows through, as the skin breaks, as the teeth dig in, you wonder not what has happened, but what it must be like on the other side. Savor the lasting flavor as it lingers in your mouth, as the dying sing there forget-me-nots, as the drained cry out for mercy, as the willing give you a look of utter affection, savor the flavor as it lingers, for so soon it shall fade, and you will once again be alone.

Sorry, this one is sort of strange...I'm no good at rhyming poetry, so I try my best to do without rhymes...It's supposed to be a vampires thoughts as it is biting people, and various reactions. At least, thats my interpretation of it. Believe what you want it to be, i guess...=P


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10-25-2007, 01:19 PM

Endless Dream


As I see you lie there lifelessly
I see your cheeks as pale as sand,
your adventurous eyes,
hidden behind closed eyelids.
Those Pinkish lips without no words,
Locks in the breath you hold within.

I'll never get to see your warm and sunny smile.
Or even hear your wonderful whisper again.
I'll never get to see your swifty walk,
Or even feel your heavenly arms,
that onec kept me warm all over.

Though I'll always wonder
what your precious mind
will think about,
as you go on
in an Endless Dream



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