"Dark Poems"

[onexsoul]

wow i havent ben posted in a while

i just made another poem/song (it has a chorus)

I can feel you all around me
even tho your gone.
I can feel your arms around me
even tho their not
I can hear your heart beating
even tho its ceased
i can feel you all around me
holding me close.

I love you and miss you
and I wish you were here
I can still feel you beside me
even tho your not here
I miss you, I love you
Dont leave me my dear,
Live on in my memory
Live on in me, my dear.

I can feel you within me
Growing inside me
Holding on to me
I you holding me
waiting for me to notice you
I do, my dear, I do
I wish you were here

I love you and I miss you
and I wish you were here
I can feel you still beside me
even tho your not here
I miss you, I love you
Dont leave me my dear,
Live on in my memory
Live on in me, my dear.

Live on
Live on
Even tho your not here
I beg you live on
Don't be forgotten
Stay here my dear
Live on, within me darling
Live on my dear.

[MaymeRachael]

Woooooooooo

Those all kick major @$$ guys ^_^'

[Slykaz1]

The Father

He was great and funny,
He was good and friendly,
He didn't even own a gun.

His homiez all warned him,
He would have to carry one,
But he never listened.
Now he can't even laugh nor cry.
Because all the worst had happened.

His Homeboyz are in regret,
His homegirlz all n tears.
They wore his favorite color
On their beautiful woven crosses.

His girlfriend's in the hospital
His mother by her side.
The newborn in the nursery,
With the father's given name.

Her mother's all in tears,
Trying not to think
That the father of her grandson,
Won't even be around.

The nurses try to calm him,
But the newborn already knows
That he just missed his father's love,
And all that would have been.

[onexsoul]

aww thats so sad

it seriously made me cry

ill edit my poem in latter

here is my poem

I feel the bite on my skin as the blade pierces the flesh
I see the trail of red as it leaves the flesh
I see the flow, I smile an easy smile
I can feel
Finally I can feel
It is not the feeling I want tho
It is pain
I do not want pain
I want love
I want happiness
Is love possible?
Is happiness attainable?
No.
Only pain
Only suffering
I watch the blood as it leaves my veins.
I lick the lovely wound and the taste brings a bitterness into my mouth.
Bitterness
A feeling
I suck the blood from the wound.
The bleeding, it stops
The crimson red… it has left
I look in the mirror
I see a stranger
I see crimson red upon the lips
And I see eyes, empty and dead.
I a face empty and shallow.
The ugly face stares back at me...
I take the razor and slash again, and again.
And, again, I drink.

[Slykaz1]

.....really?

[onexsoul]

Originally Posted by Slykaz1

.....really?

yea... and the poem i posted is seriously sick and emo...
i hate it... it reminds me of the old days
of when i DID do that... its sick.... i rote it when i did do that... its sick

[Slykaz1]

Yeah your right....but it brings a whole new perspective. As to how you might of felt at that moment. Wow great use of words too.

[onexsoul]

Originally Posted by Slykaz1

Yeah your right....but it brings a whole new perspective. As to how you might of felt at that moment. Wow great use of words too.

not really... im not good w/ words ^^

[Powermad147]

Originally Posted by onexsoul

not really... im not good w/ words ^^

There's rarely a girl in my highschool that undetstands poetry, so I'd say compared to them, you have quite a way with words -_^

Running Away

I call out, but all I seem to see is the back of your head, like I'm not even worth taking a look behind you to notice. An ocean between us, a web cascading over the gap, catching me at every turn, I can hardly hide what I feel. What happened to me? Was it when I took a step forward, when my feelings had gone and I had taken my chances, only the poison has returned, and maybe you can feel it too? I can no longer hide from what is to happen. So I will not hide, I will run from you. I notice no change in your stride, no flautering in your epression, as i step away slowly, as if you never cared, as you probably never did. And so i run away, and even if it is only i who notices the ocean, the web cascading over the distance I am making, even if you do not know how I feel and how I am running, then maybe it is only i who feels this rift. A slow song that no one will dance to, as it plays itself out within my mind, a sad song that mourns my ignorance of my own emotions, I feel it, that you never knew, that you never cared, and who am I to say you should have? I play myself out to be a funny, sarcastic boy as to distance myself, to convince us we are friends when really we are not. But on the inside I feel nothing similar to friendship. I feel sad, I feel lonely, because you could never like me. And so i run.

I've just recently realized how much it bugs me to be away from the girl I like, even though I've always been sure she didn't like me. So I've decided to stop being her friend; We were never too close, I'm sure she won't miss it. And this way, i won't keep chasing after a prize i can't have.

[onexsoul]

Originally Posted by Powermad147

There's rarely a girl in my highschool that undetstands poetry, so I'd say compared to them, you have quite a way with words -_^

awww thank u ^^