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10-29-2007, 04:14 PM

How I see the way you use your words makes your poetry powerful.

And besides our own selves will always view our poems not good enough. ^_^

Keep writing poems, Onexsoul. I want to read more of your poems.



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10-30-2007, 03:32 AM

Forever bleeding
In a pool of blood
You laugh at me and say
“It’s only just begun”

Like a poison
You run through my veins
Unseen through the flow
You are killing me

You wait for my deadly reaction
As you make your connection
Right through my heart
Now its torn apart

You wait until it
Slowly stops to beat
Wait for my last breath
Wait for me to start to break

Now as my lifeless eyes
Stare back at you
You laugh at me and say
“It’s only just begun”


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10-30-2007, 12:51 PM

What Went Wrong

As I walk to the park,
I catch myself,
talking - to no one.
I feel pretty sad,
that I won't be able -
to speak to you, anymore.
I've always wondered,
"What went wrong"
But I could never,
get an answer,
to my question.
I always thought,
it was going great for us
I went ahead,
I didn't believe my friends.
You kept on lying to me,
saying it wasn't true.
Until I, my very own eyes,
saw you hand in hand.
You weren't walking in the rain
but you were certainly,
holding hands with her.



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10-31-2007, 04:43 AM

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Forever bleeding
In a pool of blood
You laugh at me and say
“It’s only just begun”

Like a poison
You run through my veins
Unseen through the flow
You are killing me

You wait for my deadly reaction
As you make your connection
Right through my heart
Now its torn apart

You wait until it
Slowly stops to beat
Wait for my last breath
Wait for me to start to break

Now as my lifeless eyes
Stare back at you
You laugh at me and say
“It’s only just begun”

That's too dark.But it is cool that way.
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10-31-2007, 04:45 AM

Lol thats one I sent you.


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10-31-2007, 05:07 AM

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Lol thats one I sent you.
Yup just read it.
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10-31-2007, 12:26 PM

subject : If non-living things could talk. what would they say.

Why do you hurt me?
I try to be nice,
and I try not to waste,
when we're here or there.
It feels great,
when you take me
to those shows.
And it feels even more greater,
when I win a trophy,
for me and especially for you.
When I first started winning,
you took care of me,
like an everlasting toy.
Because I was always there for you.
Colors of fixing everywhere,
and cruisings at 10 M.P.H.
Watching you whistle,
at them other girls,
made me kinda jealous.
But I knew you loved me,
because I loved you too.
But ever since she came along
you've stopped the care of me,
Like though,
I had never existed before.

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10-31-2007, 12:46 PM

To be born again for your sake,
Blowing the past away on fluttering clouds;
Letting the future ride on flowing winds;
Fearlessly , unceasingly , patiently.
To be born again in your arms ;
To be born again for your sake ;
Once again to wait to be born in a golden egg;
Once again to be able to fly with silver wings ;
Unhurriedly , tenaciously , intimately
To be born again for your sake;
To turn the bliss of our meeting into a gentle light;
And the parting that's sure to come into smothering rain;
Like the little indigo flower that blooms in deciate shade.
Your taking my hand and my not shaking it off;
Our two paths merging to become one blending minds.
To be born again for my sake;
When my not minding the loneliness;
Was only the ignorance of my bliss with you
When my pain of loneliness
Was but my learning the fear of losing you.
As old shells crumble off and newborn tears fall on a cheek
with your embrace open my ethereal wings
letting me forget with your voice and your touch
breaking off the chains that blind my heart and feet.
to be born again in your arms...



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11-02-2007, 09:27 PM

As I watch the snowflakes fall
They melt into the tears
That already grace my cheeks
The burning flame inside my soul
Becomes frozen by the negative emotions coming from you
You watch as I twist and turn from the ties you hold on me
Yet forever watching over me
Is the one that will punish you
Worse than you hurt me


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11-08-2007, 02:05 PM

Awesome poems people! ^_^ Now lemmi contribute as well... XD

The Dreading

Uncontrollable vengeance
Fighting to restrain
Knowing anger and grievance
Never-ending pain

Feel my dreading

Clenched fists
Challenging glares
Rage is just the gist
Of my gritted bare

Feel my dreading

Wanting to stop it
To just freeze everything
Comes back to haunt
Coldness of the world sings

Feel my dreading

Death descends
Ever-impending doom
The prophecy of end
Hidden in the gloom

Feel my dreading

Hatred manipulates
Trapped in one's body
The darkness escalates
Can't break free

Feel my dreading

Tales of the dead
Awakening the worst
Resisting my fate
But unable to curse

Feel my dreading

One last hope
Life seeps in
As you try to grope
Just to find a helpless grin

Feel my dreading

Falling out of love
That hope is lost
As my bleeding heart lurks
In the shadow of yours

I dread...


I wrote this during one of my darker periods... ^_^; I don't deny its imperfections.. But they (my dark periods) come rare to me, lol, so maybe I lack the experience? Hope it's worthy of being here though, hehe...


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