"Dark Poems"

[AoshiShinomori]

I'd be quite surprised if you didn't post it here! (not to mention I have my personal copy of it stored safely in my swiss vault ^_^). Cooly you've been running us around with that one poem long enough. I demand you write another ^______________^

Awesome poem bro! You rock! *high five*

...I still carry that flask of holy water on my sash just in case I feel your dreading

[Slykaz1]

Thoughts of you

I've never
experienced feelings
like this before-
so intense
they're almost
overwhelming.
I know we've only
known each other
for a short time,
but you caught me
with my
defenses down
and captured
my heart
before I knew
what was happening.
Ever since that moment,
my days have been filled
with thoughts of you.
And a happiness
that keeps me skipping
a couple of inches
off the ground.

[AoshiShinomori]

oh! Nice poem though I dare say it wasn't very dark. In fact it felt fun and frolicky and awesome! ^_^

Sly-san may I ask you a question? I was quite intrigued by the fact that the poem you posted was mostly prose and when constructed into a straight sentece would still fall within the rules of prosaic grammar. I was curious to know if it was intended that way? Some styles of poetry actually seek to do that so I was wondering if you subscribe to that... ^_^

Nice going though!

[Slykaz1]

Originally Posted by AoshiShinomori

oh! Nice poem though I dare say it wasn't very dark. In fact it felt fun and frolicky and awesome! ^_^

Sly-san may I ask you a question? I was quite intrigued by the fact that the poem you posted was mostly prose and when constructed into a straight sentece would still fall within the rules of prosaic grammar. I was curious to know if it was intended that way? Some styles of poetry actually seek to do that so I was wondering if you subscribe to that... ^_^

Nice going though!

ehehe......oops didn't realize it was frolicky.......I don't remember, I wrote it when I was way younger.....

[AkuenKigahen]

I walk in the dark that once was light
Surrounded by hope, I wish all night
That in this world that we could belong
Maybe if I wrote you a simple song

If only our fates would collide
Then I could be by your side
But as the stars are shining
Our hearts are crying

I wonder if I would ever fly
I’ll never know if I don’t try
I dream of wings to hold me high
To ride with you up in the sky

I’ll sleep under the moon
And the light won’t come to soon
Because I’m not the sun
Our shadows have just begun

Now the sound of our song is fading away
And I just wish that you would stay
Another boundary that we have cross
A friend in you, which I have lost

Past the stars, past the sky
Deep in my heart I wonder why
This turned out to be
There never was a we

Yet I wish I could have it all
Without you I’d fall
If only I could just see you smile
Even if it’s only for a while


The music that has played will play no more
Because the melody we have ignored
But the words say though
I still love you

I wrote it yesterday I still have yet to come up with a title for it.

[AoshiShinomori]

OMG! This is outstanding! Look at the creativity in this thread

@Aku-San - That was really well written. I like the rhyme scheme and the connected storyline of the poem. It would be even more outstanding with a fixed meter! Great going guys! I sure am looking to read more from ya'll ^_^

@Sly-San - Teehee! Well you make it sound like you're an old shaolin monk . You should post up your new poems then! Wouldn't hurt this thread I'm sure

[Slykaz1]

Yelling

The yelling gets louder,
And louder.
I don't know why,
But it gets louder,
By the moment.
No one, can control it,
Not even them.
I won't butt in,
Because it will hurt my thoughts.
Finally the yelling,
Has calm down...
But it won't last,
For a little while.
Then once again,
The yelling starts all over.
Its like an old fashioned movie.
It's reran, over and over.
I don't know why,
They can't settle it,
In a more quieter way.

[CoolNard]

Originally Posted by AoshiShinomori

I'd be quite surprised if you didn't post it here! (not to mention I have my personal copy of it stored safely in my swiss vault ^_^). Cooly you've been running us around with that one poem long enough. I demand you write another ^______________^

Awesome poem bro! You rock! *high five*

...I still carry that flask of holy water on my sash just in case I feel your dreading

Haha, you hold me up in regards too high for my grasps, Aoshi XD~!
But I'm afraid dark moments aren't my fort`e, lol... Maybe a couple of years down the road?

P.S. keep up the good work guys, I can see potential for this thread

[onexsoul]

srryyy its so long ><
i just wrote this ^.^


i can see you
still watching me
i can feel you
still holding me
i can hear you
whispering in my ear
i can sense you
still there
i try to fight you
you win again
i try to escape you
you find me again
you are there
and i cannot stand it
leave me be
leave me be
i call out to the others
they hear my call
they come to me
and demolish you all
you cannot live on
i wont let you
go find another to haunt
go find another to whisper evil things to
go find another to kill
go
go
go
the others take you away
and they send you back
you scream in anger
i tremble at the sound
go back
go back
leave me
leave me
never
never
will i see you
watching me
never
never
will i feel you
still holding me
never
never
will I hear you
whispering in my ear
never
never
will i sense you
still there
you are gone

[AoshiShinomori]

Good going there onex! First time I've specifically seen a haunting theme on a poetry thread

I'm quite curious though onex-san, do you feel that one word lines accent the poem?