BloodLine~My Vampire Movie!

MaymeRachael · (#1 (**permalink**))

What so you think of the opening setting?

America- 1808

It's a dark night...
A beautiful woman named Mary Elizabeth, a wealthy daughter of a French aristocrat, is running in the dead of night from a unseen attacker. The wooded area she is incased in is a very rough terrain, and suddenly she falls upon the damp earth. Franically, she beigns clawing her way through the rocks and dirt until she is satsified at what she has done. From her gown she pulls a dark velvet, drawstring bag and places the object inside the bag into the ground. As she is covering the hole, in the dim light of her old oil lamp the shadow of her attacker becomes visable...

miyavikuun · (#2 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by MaymeRachael

What so you think of the opening setting?

America- 1808

It's a dark night...
A beautiful woman named Mary Elizabeth, a wealthy daughter of a French aristocrat, is running in the dead of night from a unseen attacker. The wooded area she is incased in is a very rough terrain, and suddenly she falls upon the damp earth. Franically, she beigns clawing her way through the rocks and dirt until she is satsified at what she has done. From her gown she pulls a dark velvet, drawstring bag and places the object inside the bag into the ground. As she is covering the hole, in the dim light of her old oil lamp the shadow of her attacker becomes visable...

oh taht sounds cool just from that i would want to see it

QuoyaNatsume · (#3 (**permalink**))

OO sounds cool. Can I add to it?? Or do you have more??
I love Vampires

Queen of the Damned
Interview with the Vampire
Bramstroker's Dracula
etc., etc.,

Peachboy · (#4 (**permalink**))

sounds cool

miyavikuun · (#5 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by QuoyaNatsume

OO sounds cool. Can I add to it?? Or do you have more??
I love Vampires

Queen of the Damned
Interview with the Vampire
Bramstroker's Dracula
etc., etc.,

ahh i love the moive and book of interview with a vampire but i want to read the next book in the series

AkuenKigahen · (#6 (**permalink**))

Sounds interesting and what a coincidence my name also happens to be Mary Elizabeth.

Powermad147 · (#7 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by MaymeRachael

What so you think of the opening setting?

America- 1808

It's a dark night...
A beautiful woman named Mary Elizabeth, a wealthy daughter of a French aristocrat, is running in the dead of night from a unseen attacker. The wooded area she is incased in is a very rough terrain, and suddenly she falls upon the damp earth. Franically, she beigns clawing her way through the rocks and dirt until she is satsified at what she has done. From her gown she pulls a dark velvet, drawstring bag and places the object inside the bag into the ground. As she is covering the hole, in the dim light of her old oil lamp the shadow of her attacker becomes visable...

OOOH,. good timing ^_^ I just finished my screenplay for my scriptwriting class. I'm in the mood to critique =P....Which I would, but I see nothing wrong here (other than the "oh so important" screeplay format...Meh

)...Sounds good ^_^.

MaymeRachael · (#8 (**permalink**))

Are you serious! How cool is that your name is in my movie ^_^

@ my ninja chef!- you have a scriptwriting class o_O' I hate you ^_^
What do you mean by "format" ?

And to everyone else ...than you so much for the responsesand yes I'll be adding more as I get the final copy typed ^_~